I love London!

I spent my holydays holidays in London this year. It was my first time in the city and I had a great time visiting its museums and galleries (many of them are free). I had have visited other museums before, but none like the British Museum. It's is wonderful!!. Also, the people is are friendly and there are a lot of parks to walk around in. I enjoyed it very much!!

I love London!

I spent my holidays in London this year. It was my first time in the city, and I had a great time visiting its museums and galleries (many of them are free). I had visited other museums before, but none like British Museum, its is wonderful!!. Also people are is friendly, and there are a lot of parks to walk in. I enjoyed it very much!!

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Hi!

Well done :-) I have corrected grammatical errors in green and I have changed things so that they make more sense or sound more natural in blue :0)