My first note

Hello, this is my first note in English, I hope it is correct but if it were not, I pray you to have more patience with it. My name is Angelo and I live in a little town near Salerno and I never had occasion for now to go in UK or USA to improve my language skills. For this reason I learned English totally with online app, and now I am on Italki  looking for some friends that can help me to speak the first language in the world fluently. If you have read this note and you are interested to learn Italian language, you can add me as friend and we can help each other. Thanks for your attention and see you soon.

My first note

Hello, this is my first note in English, I hope it is correct but if it is not, I ask you to have more patience with it. My name is Angelo and I live in a little town near Salerno and I have never had the chance to go to the UK or the USA to improve my language skills. For this reason I learned English totally with an online app, and now I am on Italki to looking for some friends that can help me with speaking this useful language fluently. If you have read this note and you are interested in learning Italian, you can add me as friend and we can help  each other. Thanks for your attention and see you soon.

Hello Angelo,

Welcome to italki. This is a nice introduction and I am sure you will find some people to help you. There are just a few mistakes - we use 'the' with the UK and the USA because they are a collection of states but not Italy and Spain. We also use the preposition 'in' after 'interested'.

Hope this helps

Bob

Hello, this is my first note in English, I hope it is correct but if it were not, I pray you to have more patience with it. My name is Angelo and I live in a little town near Salerno and I never had occasion for now to go in to UK or USA to improve my language skills. For this reason I learned English totally with online app, and now I am on Italki to looking for some friends that to can help me with speaking fluently this useful language. If you have read this note and you are interested to learn Italian language, you can add me as friend and we can help us each other. Thanks for your attention and see you soon.