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Bing wen
About My Family My name is Bingwen. I'm from Taiwan. I'm a college student. I'm twenty two years old. My family lives in Taichung city. My father is a businessman. He's a happy man everyday. My mother is a nurse. She's a great mother. I have one sister. She is a older sister. Her name is Lucy. Lucy is a designer. She's twenty six years old. We are a small family. We have a pet. It is a turtle.Its name is little A. I love my family. Becuse we can support everyone.

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My name is Bingwen. I'm from Taiwan, . I'm a college student. I'm of twenty two years old. 雖然語法沒錯, 不過非常單調與小孩子寫法沒有差別.My family lives in Taichung city. My father is a businessman, . He's a each day, a happy-go-lucky man everyday. My mother is a nurse. She's and a great mother too. I have one older sister. She is a older sister. Her name is Lucy. Lucy is and a designer. 設計什么, 服裝呢或是電腦設計師? 太多不同的職業, 写得不清 She's twenty six years old. We are a small Our family is small. 語法沒錯但每條字句有同样的结构也是很單調的We have a pet. It is a turtle.Its name is and we named it "Little A". I love my family. Becuse we can support Everyone supports each other. 你的写法的童意思是說 "大家可以支持大家" 而不是"大家互相支持"

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