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I sense the emotions...
was trying to take out the fear, to win it by dream...it says the overcoming via consciousness.. that's possible and at the first place, seems. i felt that. so here is my comprehensive editing below。 Of course, poetry is everything and everything for each one;it's a soft sculpture to each soul.
Or this is only trying to say...please dont kill my dreams!:) Anyway, a good training in words:))
不要叫起来,这场恶梦束的候。。。。。。 不要叫起来, 当这场噩梦结束的时候
恐怖不再是 。。。。。。。。。。。。。。恐怖不再有
的梦想不是的恶更强 。。。。。。。。。。梦想不存恶更强
不要叫在恐惧中尖叫 。。。。。。。。。。不要在恐惧中尖叫
血腥的眼泪 。。。。。。。。。。。。。。那血腥的泪
求你将拖出去 。。。。。。。。。。。。。求你将其拖出去
请...不要叫 。。。。。。。。。。。。。。请......
。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。.不要叫
I like the strong emotions in this and the ryhthm.
just a poem I tried to write in chinese
不要叫,这场恶梦结束的时候
恐怖已不再
梦想还在。
不要在恐惧中尖叫
无助的眼泪
流出来。
请...不要叫。
just a poem I tried to write in chinese
不要叫我起来,这场恶梦结束的时候
恐怖不再是
的梦想不是的,恶更强。
不要叫在恐惧中尖叫
血腥的眼泪
求你将它拖出去。
请...不要叫。
just a poem I tried to write in chinese
不要叫起来,这场恶梦束的候
恐怖不再是
的梦想不是的恶更强。
不要叫在恐惧中尖叫
血腥的眼泪
求你将拖出去。
请...不要叫。
Hats off to you in your endeavor. I suggest you provide an English version so that we can help you articulate the nuances in Chinese or to show you a better way :)
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