Which world would you say YES to me in?
I regarded myself as a sensitive man. Whenever you were in trouble, I gave you a hand as soon as possible. I really loved you so much that I got crazy. That made me blind. I am actually an insensitive man.
I clearly remember that we talked over the phone every night. You told me, "if you get a crush on somebody, tell me. but I hope it won't happen." And then, I told you the same words. We made the promise. I had had an illusion and the mistake had begun since the moment. I misunderstood that we loved each other and you are the one to me.
I had thought of you every day, every time and every moment. but you didn't. I realized last week that you loved another guy, and you didn't tell me besides. You broke the promise. I got to know it when I saw a post on your SNS timeline. I couldn't believe that you loved the guy I didn't know. But I am not mad at you at all, if anything, I feel like I'm totally released. I won't feel hurt anymore.
I'm tired of loving you. I am going to be one of your best friends from now on. Whenever you get frustrated, I'll listen to you. Whenever you have trouble, I help you. I just want to see you smiling.
Thank you for giving me this feeling. You were the worst, and the best to me.
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" And then, I told you the same words. " There's a rule in english to not use the word And at the beginning of a sentence. Having said that, let me say that starting in the 90's rapper crappers and liberal creative writing teachers said that its okay.
"I had had an illusion and the mistake had begun since the moment." should be: " since that moment" .
" I had thought of you every day, every time and every moment. but you didn't." should be something like this: " I thought of you every day, all the time, every waking moment. You hardly ever thought of me though."
" I got to know it when I saw a post on your SNS timeline" instead: I found out about it when I saw it listed on a post, in your SNS timeline.
Try not to use the word But at the beginning of a sentence also.
Maybe I corrected what seems like a lot but its really not. Keep up the good work !
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