我的第一次写作

大家好！我是Kanako《佳奈子》，我是日本人，我的老家在长野县。我从上个年去年九月开始工作在新加坡工作。
我来完新加坡怎么时候在新加坡呆了一段时间以后，我想学习汉语！我四月开始钟学习。我能理解书面语言，但是很困难记住怎么发音很困难。。。但是我会加油！！ 

Thank you very much for visiting me!
This is the first time to write in Chinese, sooo difficult... Even I can understand meanings and how to write in Chinese, can not remember how to read nor spell in Ping Yin! Toooooo much!!
But I still would love to learn... it would be great if you can help me... thank you so much!

慢慢来，一定会学会，加油！

我的第一次写作

大家好！我是Kanako“佳奈子”，我是日本人，我的老家在长野县。我从上个年去年九月份开始工作在新加坡工作。
我刚来完新加坡怎么的时候，我想学习汉语！我四月钟中开始学习。虽然有些字很困难是记得记住怎么念。。。但是我会加油！！

Thank you very much for visiting me!
This is the first time to write in Chinese, sooo difficult... Even I can understand meanings and how to write in Chinese, can not remember how to read nor spell in Ping Yin! Toooooo much!!
But I still would love to learn... it would be great if you can help me... thank you so much!

我的第一次写作

大家好！我是Kanako《佳奈子》，我是日本人，我的老家在长野县。我从上个年（去年）九月工作开始在新加坡工作。
我来完新加坡怎么时候我离开新加坡之后（I don't understand what do you want to express），我想学习汉语！我四月钟学习（do  you want to say that :I have learn chinese from April.or something else) 。很困难的是记得怎么念。。。但是我会加油！！

Thank you very much for visiting me!
This is the first time to write in Chinese, sooo difficult... Even I can understand meanings and how to write in Chinese, can not remember how to read nor spell in Ping Yin! Toooooo much!!
But I still would love to learn... it would be great if you can help me... thank you so much!

我的第一次写作

大家好！我是（叫）Kanako《佳奈子》，我是日本人，我的老家在长野县。我从上个年（去年）九月（开始）在新加坡工作。
我来完（到）新加坡以后，想学习汉语！我四月钟已经学习（了四个月）。记得怎么念很困难。。。但是我加油（努力）！！

Thank you very much for visiting me!
This is the first time to write in Chinese, sooo difficult... Even I can understand meanings and how to write in Chinese, can not remember how to read nor spell in Ping Yin! Toooooo much!!
But I still would love to learn... it would be great if you can help me... thank you so much!

我的第一次写作

大家好！我是Kanako《佳奈子》，我是日本人，我的老家在长野县。我从去年九月开始在新加坡工作。
我来到新加坡的时候，开始想学习汉语！我不记得怎么念。。。但是我会加油！！

Thank you very much for visiting me!
This is the first time to write in Chinese, sooo difficult... Even I can understand meanings and how to write in Chinese, can not remember how to read nor spell in Ping Yin! Toooooo much!!
But I still would love to learn... it would be great if you can help me... thank you so much!