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Ancient Chiese Beauty I like drawning,expecially ancient chinse beauty. They wore beautiful clothes,making their hair towering with some decorations. There were four beauties in old China,whose name were Xishi,Zhaojun Wang,Diaochan and Yuhuan Yang. How beautiful were they? It was said: "The fish was amazing and sinked by Xishi's besuty;The wild geese was so attractde by the beauty of Zhaojun Wang that it fell from the sky ;The moon hided when it saw Diaochan;The flowers were shy beacause they saw the pretty Yuhuan Yang." I am poud of them,as well as the ancient culture of the chinese nation. The image is from internet

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Ancient Chinese Beauties of Ancient Times 这样写比较清楚而不以为是中国老美人! 

 

I like to drawning,especially ancient Chinese beauty ladies of ancient times. They wore beautiful clothes,_making their hair coiffered high and decorated with amazing ornaments. towering with some decorations.

There were are 現在还是四大美人 four beauties in old China.__whose name were They are 她們的名子还沒变! Xishi,_ Wang Zhaojun 她们是歷史名, 不可以用西方式来写 Wang,_Diaochan and Yang Yuhuan Yang.


How beautiful were they? It was said:


"The fish was amazing and sinked by sank in shame from Xishi's besuty beauty; the wild geese was so attractde by the beauty of Zhaojun Wang that it fell swooped from the sky to have a better look at Wang Zhaojun;  the moon hided in shame when it saw Diaochan and the flowers were shy blushed from the beauty of Yang beacause they saw the pretty Yuhuan Yang." 


I am proud of them,_as well as the ancient culture of the Chinese nation.

The image is from the internet.

 

閉月羞花之容 The face that made the moon hid [behind the clouds] and the flowers blushed in shame

沉魚落颜之貌 The countenance that sank the fish [to the bottom] and wild geese swooped [for a closer look].


Yang Gui Fei is the main cause of ruining of a glorious dynasty. Hsi Shi (depending on which country's point of view) also ruined a kingdom.  Wang Chao Chun bore the barbarian chieftan two children and then later remarried to the next chieftan; unlike the "orthodox" version of how she committed suicide rather than to "carry another pipa".  Only Diaochan may be excused for being used as a pawn for trying to save a dynasty.

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I like drawning 妳喜歡畫畫?or I like drawings. 妳喜歡各式的圖畫,expecially of the ancient chinese beauty.
 
"The fish was amazeding by Xishi's besuty and sanked ; the wild geese(~the plural; goose~the singular) were so attracted to the beauty of Zhaojun Wang that it they fell from the sky. 沈魚落雁


The moon hided when it saw Diaochan; the flowers were shy beacause they saw the pretty Yuhuan Yang." 閉月羞花

 

I am proud of them. 
The image is from the Internet.

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I have made a bad mistake.The word "chinese"has been written in a wrong way twice.

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