My first entry!

As I am writing the ground is moving.... a lot. But I am safe, there was a recent earthquake so I am use to a little shaking! I want to improve my writing in english, I do not have a lot of oportunities to write in english so I am going to write here, on this website. I'm learning Italian as well and I am a total beginner, but I think it will be easier than English because it is very similar to Spanish. I will write every Sunday in order to practice and I will read all the Harry Potter's books to gain vocabulary (I have read all of them, but in spanish).

Hola Alejandro, esto es bien escrito - especialmente si fuiste teniendo las réplicas mientras escribiendo!!

My first entry!

WhenWhilst I am writing this the ground is moving.... a lot. But I am safe, there was a recent earthquake so I am used to a little shaking ! I want to improve my written English. I do not have a lot of opportunities to write in English so I am going to write here, on this website. I'm learning Italian as well but I am a total beginner, but I think it will be easier than English because it is very similar than  to spanish. I will write every Sunday in order to practise and I will read all the Harry Potter's books for the purpose of getting vocabulary (I have read all of them, but in Spanish).

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Hi! In green I have written grammatical corrections and in blue I've tried to suggest things that might make your writing sound a bit better (in my opinion). Other than a few minor things, this was a very good piece!

Hopefully this helps!

p.s. the practice vs. practise is a tricky one, and many native English speakers aren't very good with the distinction. Practise  is the verb, and practice is the noun. Hopefully that helped!

My first entry!

When I am writing the ground is moving.... a lot. But I am safe, there was a recent earthquake so I am used to a little shake ! I want to improve my writing english writting skills, I do not have a lot of oportunities to write in english so I am going to write here, on this website. I'm learning italian as well but I am a total beginner, but I think it will be easier than english because is very similar than to spanish. I will write every sunday in order to practice and I will read all the Harry Potter's books for the purpose of get improving vocabulary (I have read all of them, but in spanish).

My first entry!

When I am writing the ground is moving.... a lot. But I am safe. There was a recent earthquake so I am use to a little shaking ! I want to improve my written English, I do not have a lot of oportunities to write in English so I am going to write here, on this website. I'm learning Italian as well but I am a total beginner, but I think it will be easier than English because it is very similar to spanish. I will write every Sunday in order to practice and I will read all the Harry Potter's books for the purpose of getting vocabulary (I have read all of them, but in spanish).

Great job the 4th Harry Potter is my favorite :-)