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I like reading Books provide me a window to see the world,a way to experience manys events that i can not go through in my real life.I can cry and laugh with the characters,and feel the happiness,sadness and depression.The books wide my mind and horizon.They tell me that is not a good idea to judge people optionally,and they teach me to understand the world by more perspectives.I need to think by myself instead of being a parrot.

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I like reading

Books provide me a window through which to see the world, a way to experience manys events that I can not go through experience in my real life. I can cry and laugh with the characters, and feel the their happiness, sadness and depression. The books widen my mind and horizons. They tell me that it is not a good idea to judge people optionally (?), and they teach me to understand the world by through more perspectives. I need to think by myself instead of being a parrot.

 

 

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Don't forget to put spaces after punctuation marks! It is very important!

I don't know what you mean by "optionally," but the sentence is okay without it.

 

Books are great! :) What good books have you read recently?

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