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中国电视剧 上个星期有人告诉关于 www.iqiyi.com。一个网站有很多中国电视剧。我们看很多中国电影,但是它们的故事常常old-fashioned,所以 www.iqiyi.com 很非常好。这个周末,我在看加油实习生。这个电视剧不非常好,但是我听得懂一些。我的老师还推荐北京爱情故事,家有儿女。最近,婉华开始大学,所以我们一起没有很多时间。我们一起的时候,我们不看电视,不看电影,instead 我们说话。我们不一起的时候,我看中国电视。 Last week someone told me about iqiyi.com. This site has a lot of Chinese tv shows. We watch a lot of Chinese movies but they are usually old-fashioned, so iqiyi.com is very good. I'm watching 加油实习生 now. This show isn't great, but I understand a little of what I hear. My teacher also recommended 北京爱情故事 and 家有儿女. Recently, Wan Hua started college, so when we are together we don't watch tv or movies, instead we talk. When we aren't together, I watch Chinese tv.

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中国电视剧

上个星期有人告诉我关于 www.iqiyi.com。一个网站有很多中国电视剧。我们看了很多中国电影,但是它们的故事常常old-fashioned,所以 www.iqiyi.com 非常好。这个周末,我在看加油实习生。这个电视剧非常不好,但是我听得懂一些。我的老师还推荐北京爱情故事,家有儿女。最近,婉华开始上大学,所以我们没有很多在一起的时间。我们一起的时候,我们不看电视,不看电影,instead 而是说说话。我们不在一起的时候,我看中国电视。



Last week someone told me about iqiyi.com. This site has a lot of Chinese tv shows. We watch a lot of Chinese movies but they are usually old-fashioned, so iqiyi.com is very good. I'm watching 加油实习生 now. This show isn't great, but I understand a little of what I hear. My teacher also recommended 北京爱情故事 and 家有儿女. Recently, Wan Hua started college, so when we are together we don't watch tv or movies, instead we talk. When we aren't together, I watch Chinese tv.

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中国电视剧

上个星期有人告诉我关于 www.iqiyi.com。,一个网站有很多中国电视剧有很多中国电视剧的网站。我们看了很多中国电影,但是它们的故事常常很old-fashioned(过时),所以 www.iqiyi.com 很非常好。(There must be a logical mistake, if sth. old-fashioned, how can you say it's very good.)这个周末,我在看加油实习生。这个电视剧不非常是很好(If you want to say not very good. We always say "不是很好", not "不非常好"),但是我听得懂一些。我的老师还推荐《北京爱情故事》,《家有儿女》。最近,婉华开始上大学(or “开始了大学生活”),所以我们一起没有很多时间在一起。我们一起的时候,我们不看电视,不看电影,instead(而是) 我们说话。我们不在一起的时候,我看中国电视。 

 

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上周有人告诉我了“www.iqiyi.com"这个网站,上面有很多的中国电视剧。我们在上面看了很多中国电影,虽然它们的故事常常很过时,但是我还是觉得www.iqiyi.com非常好。这个周末,我们看了加油实习生。这个电视剧不是很好看,但是我还是听懂了一些。我的老师还推荐了《北京爱情故事》,《家有儿女》。最近,婉华大学开学了,所以我们在一起的时间不太多。当我们在一起的时候不看电视,也不看电影,而是说话。当我们不在一起的时候,我就看中国电视剧。

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看电视是个好办法,但交流说话更重要。
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中国电视剧

上个星期有人告诉我一个网站www.iqiyi.com。里面有很多中国电视剧。我们看了很多中国电影,尽管它们的故事常常old-fashioned(过时),我仍然觉得www.iqiyi.com 很非常好。现在我在看加油实习生。这个电视剧不怎么好,但我听得懂一些。我的老师还推荐了北京爱情故事和家有儿女。最近,婉华开始大学生活了,所以我们没有很多时间呆在一起。我们在一起的时候,不看电视,不看电影,而是交流。不在一起的时候,我会去看中国电视。



Last week someone told me about iqiyi.com. This site has a lot of Chinese tv shows. We watch a lot of Chinese movies but they are usually old-fashioned, so iqiyi.com is very good. I'm watching 加油实习生 now. This show isn't great, but I understand a little of what I hear. My teacher also recommended 北京爱情故事 and 家有儿女. Recently, Wan Hua started college, so when we are together we don't watch tv or movies, instead we talk. When we aren't together, I watch Chinese tv.

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