I'm sorry, Romulus, but your 'corrections' aren't all that good. First of all, you wrongly assumed he meant he's meaning to "lie down" (to rest). He meant to 'stop what you're doing'; i.e.; 'to put everything down.'

Secondly, it's "to lie down." nor "lay down." That's because "lay" is a transitive verb, so it needs a direct object; as in: "Lay down your arms!"

So, to correct things properly:

"When you feel tired, put everything down and go have a rest, if possible.
And be quick about it."

And that paragraph is best condensed further to:

"When you feel tired, put everything down, and go have a rest as soon as possible."

Because I think that's actually what he meant.

when you feel tired ,lay everything down go to and  take have a rest if possible .

when you feel tired ,lay everything down go to and  take have a rest if possible .
Don't hesitate and be quick quickly to do that.  Do you agree on my view? Guys?? with me guys?



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