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rare dream I dream a rare dream yesterday.I remember two or three things. I go to a bar and there I found a beautiful female bartender. She offer to me something to taste, maybe cheesse or chocolate, I don´t remerber well. She insist to me and I pick one of this pieces. Then, someone talk to me in german (I don´t understand) and I said: "In english please!". After this, the woman, sudenly take me and kiss me, hold me, and other good things, you know... then I awake. Thank for reading.

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Rare dream

I dreamt a rare dream yesterday. I remember two or three things. I go to a bar and there I find a beautiful female bartender. She offers to me something to taste, maybe cheese or chocolate, I don´t remember well. She insists to me and I pick one of these pieces. Then, someone talks to me in German (I don´t understand) and I say: "In English please!". After this, the woman sudenly takes me and kisses me, holds me, and other good things, you know... then I awake.

Thank for reading.

 

[Good work.  Usually, when telling about a dream, we use present tense - don't ask me why.  However, regardless of whether you use past or present tense, the tenses must all be the same through the story.]

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