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In the first episode the journalist meet Mo, a woman that who1* is 34 years old and she is really determinate has a lot of determination. She was born in a small village in the west of England and studied hard to get good A level results. Then she studied stage management, worked for some in small theatre companies and until she ended up at the Royal Alber Hall, where she is a show management manager. Mo lives in London, in a small owned Victoria terraced house she owns and she has a lodger because she has rented one of the rooms in the house to an old friend. She likes staying at home whenever she can and taking care of it2* making improvements to the house. Mo is a supporter of organizations that deal with the environment such ad as Greenpeace, and she recycles everything is possibile. Mo is proud of working at the RAH where have place 300 different shows take place in a year, such as classical or pop music concerts, comedy,tennis and ice skating and here ballet companies and orchestras from all the world can perform with huge public audiences. Mo shows the journalist the galery from where it possible get a wonderful view of the auditorium which can hold over 5000 people, and the Queen's box bought by Queen Victoria 125 years ago.

1* this doesn't define the woman- eg The woman who works in the theatre- so you can't change 'who' to 'that'

2* taking care of- is more for things that are alive or delicate- a person, an animal, a plant, an expensive piece of jewelry. It doesn't sound good for your own house.

Some errors but in general well corrected with nice use of vocabulary and well constructed sentences.