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time to go outside almost always i go out outside when the night comming, the most important to me is relaxing with the people, frecuently I do several excersise, i mean, i do for 2 or 3 hours, first i dance in a class called zuma, then I dance salsa with my mates of coreography, we need to prepare for the carnival, and it´s difficult for us doing coreographys in only 3 days. Actually, we going to dance in a event for a lot of people, and im nervious for that. It is important to me, because my father is the director and i always want to pleaced him.

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time to go outside

Almost always I go out outside when the night is comming.,

 

The most important thing for to me is relaxing with the people.,

 

Frecquently (frequently) I do several excersise, i mean, i do exercise for 2 or 3 hours.,

otra opción:  I exercise a lot: usually 2 or 3 hours.

 

First i dance in a class called zuma;, then I dance salsa with my mates of choreography mates:, we need to prepare for the carnival, and it´s difficult for us doing choreographys in only 3 days. Actually, we are going to dance in a event for a lot of people, and i'm nervious for about that.

It is important to me, because my father is the director and i always want to pleaced please him.

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time to go outside

            

I almost always go out outside when the night is coming. The most important thing to me is relaxing with people, I exercise frequently ,i mean, for 2 or 3 hours. First I dance in a class called Zuma, then I dance Salsa with my choreography mates. We need to prepare for the carnival, and it´s difficult doing choreography in only 3 days. We are dancing in a event for a lot of people, and I'm nervous about that.

It is important to me, because my father is the director and i always want to please him.

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