Monday
Today is Monday. I got up at 7:00 a.m. After I ate my breakfast. I planned what I need to do this week.
Today I want to finish my report , and let me have some time doing exercise, and I can do something what I like after work. I like watching movie , learning English, doing sport , and etc.
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Monday
Today is Monday. I got up at 7:00 a.m. After I ate my breakfast, I planned what I need to do this week.
Today I want to finish my report, and let me have some time to doing exercise, and I can want to do something what I like after work. I like watching movies, learning English, doing sport, among other things. and etc.
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Monday
Today is Monday. I got up at 7:00 a.m.
Good.
After I ate my breakfast. I planned what I need to do this week.
Good.
Today I want to finish my report , and let me have some time doing exercise, and I can do something what I like after work.
Today I want to finish my report , and let me to have some time doing for exercise, and I can to do something what I like after work.
Parallel construction: I want to V, to V, and to V.
I like watching movie , learning English, doing sport , and etc.
I like watching movies, learning English, doing sports , and etc.
Good parallel construction: I like V-ing, V-ing, V-ing, etc.
Don't need "and". "etcetera" already has that meaning.
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Thank you .Walter.
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This is a nice paragraph, very easy to understand.
Sounds like you are busy!
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