Walking back home Note: a short composition about someone who had to walk back home in a very foggy afternoon. "[...]A silhouette of what happened to be… a cat jumped onto him. Its black fur made it indistinguishable amidst the dim light. With a loud meow, the little creature approached him, a tiny bell clinking as it limped with difficulty. One of its paws seemed hurt. Pushing aside any doubts, Blake decided it was better to hurry up back home, holding the lump of black fur in his arms this time. Later, he would learn that this black cat was actually Mrs Jenkings’, a neighbour of his who had passed away some weeks before. Her cat had been missing since then. Patting the head of his now new friend, sunk in the couch in front of the chimney, he thought for himself that, either way, it was good to have a pet." Could any kind sould help me out and tell me if the paragraph above is ok...? Thanks in advance ^_^