A Poem About Love （爱是什么）
爱是什么
我不懂
告诉我
别说话
白白是白
风来风去
黑黑是黑
花来花飞
在哪儿是假
要高山等下雨
可是我别等
眼泪来了
这是爱吗？
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A Poem About Love （爱是什么）
爱是什么
我不明了
请启发我
去不通过言语
白即是白
风起风停
黑既是黑
花谢花飞
亦真亦幻
高峻的山峰守望雨落
可我不愿守候
视线渐渐模糊
这是就是爱吗？
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A Poem About Love （爱是什么）
爱是什么
我不甚明
请告与我
不用言语
白即是白
风起风止
黑即是黑
花开花谢
皆是虚妄/蜃楼
高山等雨
可我不愿
泪眼模糊
这就是爱？
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A Poem About Love （爱是什么）
爱是什么
我不懂
告诉我
不要说了话
Except for the last line, it is quite good. If you want it to be more poetic in a four character form...
愛是何物
非我得懂
請告於我
但謊莫說 From your English. I had a different interpretation before I read your English intent.
White is white The wind comes and goes black is black The flowers come and goes (I want to refer to the petal flying away). Where? There is only lies
白白是白 真白是實 This is more Chinese style.
风来风去 风来风过
黑黑是黑 黑总是黑
花来花飞 花飞花落
在哪儿是假 終在何处? Again from your English.
要高山等下雨 高山候雨
可是我别等 我非待之
眼泪来了 泪珠滴滴
这是爱吗？ 此是愛乎?
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I only wrote it in Chinese. I didn't make a English version, but I will write a quick one.
What is love?
I don’t understand
Don’t make up lies
White is white
The wind comes and goes
black is black
The flowers come and goes (I want to refer to the petal flying away).
Where? There is only lies. (This line was suppose to be in this verse)
The tall mountain waits for the rain
But, I don’t have to wait
I’m already crying.
Is this love? (I didn’t intend to write this last line).
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If you don't mind,May you plz show me the english version,It must be a wondful poem in english.Thx :)
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