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良い天気です 今日は皆さん,私の名前はハイリルです。インドネシア人です。今日は良い天気です。お日様が空に光っています。そして,鳥の歌声がきこえる。実は今月が休暇中です。ですから私は毎日日本に勉強します。つまらないであったら私は海と山にいきますよ。あの場所が新鮮だから。本当に,今月は楽しかった。 Hello everybody. My name is Hairil. I'm indonesian. Today is a good day. The sun is shining brightly and I can hear bird is singing. Actually, this month I'm still having vacation. Therefore, everyday I'm studying japanese. If I'm bored, I go to the beach or mountain because at those places is quite fresh. Really, this vacation month is great for me. I wish someone can correct this, I'm still newbie to learn japanese so I cannot create complicated sentence. I really appreciate your help. よろしくお願いします。

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良い天気です

今日は皆さん,私の名前はハイリルです。インドネシア人です。今日は良い天気です。お日様が空に光っています。そして,鳥の歌声がきこえるます。実は、今月がは休暇中です。ですから私は毎日日本語にを勉強しています。つまらないであっもし退屈(たいくつ)したら私は海浜辺(はまべ)とか山にいきますよ。あの場所がはとても空気が新鮮だですから(or あの場所はとてもさわやかですから)。本当に,今月は楽しかった。

 

浜辺や(orと)山:the beach and the mountain

浜辺か山:the beach or the mountain

 

The frase "場所が新鮮だ" seems like the places are new to you. 

"新鮮" has 3 meanings.

The first is for food (fresh meat: 新鮮な肉(にく),

the second is for air, water, atomosphere.

And the third is for places, things which are new to you.

I think you want to use it in the second meaning,

so "空気が新鮮だ" or "さわやかだ" are much better expressions for your feeling.

 

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