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I want present [meaning?]
My name´s Irene, and I am from Spain. I love my country but I like so [better: very] much to know about other countries and other cultures.
I´m a social educator in a lower center [meaning? small town?]. I think that my work is more interesting but I need a change of my live in my life, and I study [better: 'am studying', since the action is continuing, both present and future] Primary School in the university because I would like an other a different future, and I like so [better: very] much child children [plural of child] and education child childhood education.
Better: '...and I like children and childhood education very much.' The 'very much' is usually at the end.
The pronoun 'I' is always capitalized in English.
I want present
My name´s Irene, and I come from Spain. I love my country but I like so much know other countries and other cultures. would like to get to know other countries and their cultures!
I´m a social educator in a ?lower center?. (If by lower center you mean 'south' of centre, you may want to use something like 'I'm a social educator in downtown district in Spain,*city*) I think that my work is more interesting but, I need a change of my live pace. I studied Primary School in at the university of *name of university* because I would like an other future alternative aprroach to studying educating and working with children! and i like so much child and education child.
I hope I helped, Irene.
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