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A daily blog: day one -----今天,我决定开一本网络日记。 为什么呢? 那,一本博客可以当学习语言方法。 有博客的话 (其实我已经觉得翻译上面的讯息很难啊, 我真正在struggling!(怎么说呢?)。博客让我每天都用目标语言(?哈哈)记日常的经历, 我觉得这样可以把语言水平进步得很快。这样我每天又可以练习我读的语言又让你们母语(how to say native speaker?) 来帮我改正我的错误。 我觉得这样终究会利自己的语言学习过程。 从今天开始我常常会记日记关于我的日常活动,爱好等等。例如会用普通话,葡萄牙语,瑞典语和德语。------- I believe the above text makes little sense.. I notice now how hard it is for me to actually write a piece in Chinese. Please help me out by correcting the mistakes, suggesting better vocabulary an Here is what I intended to say: Today, I decided to start a blog. Why? Well, as a tool to language learning. Having a blog, provides me with incentive to write something everyday, in my target language(s). This way, I get some exercise writing a piece of text in a language that I'm learning, and at the same time you, hopefully a native speaker of that target language, can read and correct it for me. This will eventually benefit the language learning process, I believe. From today on, I will frequently write a short text on my daily activities, interests and so on, in for instance Mandarin Chinese, Portuguese, Swedish and German.

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A daily blog: day one

-----今天,我决定开一本网络日记。 为什么呢? 那,写一本博客可以当作学习语言的方法。 有博客的话 (其实我已经觉得翻译上面的讯息很难啊, 我真正在struggling!(怎么说呢?)。博客让我每天都用目标语言想学的语言(?哈哈)记日常的经历, 我觉得这样可以让我的把语言水平进步得很快。这样我每天又既可以练习我读的语言,又可以让你们说母语的人(how to say native speaker?) 来帮我改正我的错误。 我觉得这样终究会有利于自己的语言学习过程。 从今天开始我会常常会记用日记记录关于我的日常活动,爱好等等。例如会用普通话,葡萄牙语,瑞典语和德语。-------

Having a blog, provides me with incentive to write something everyday, in my target language(s).

博客会(having a blog)给我(provides me) 一种 每天(everyday) 用我想学习的语言 (in my target language) 写点东西(write something)的动力(incentive)。

博客会给我一种动力。Having a blog provides me with an incentive.

博客会给我一种 写东西的 动力。Having a blog provides me with an incentive to write something.

博客会给我一种 每天 写东西的 动力。Having a blog provides me with an incentive to write something everyday.

博客会给我一种 每天 用我想学习的语言 写点东西 的动力。Having a blog provides me with an incentive to write something everyday, in my target language(s)

struggling 努力

既……又……    either……or

既可以……又可以……     either can…… or can……

native speaker  说母语的人

benefit something  有利于something



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struggling! “挣扎“或者年轻的小朋友会用“纠结”。

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