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I translated song's lyrics...
I want to comfort somebody so I translated a song from polish to english. Please, check if it's meaning is light:
My thoughts are like a stormy sea
And I don't know how to stay in the middle of these waves
I see you like through the fog
You're standing so calm
I'm calling you: don't let me to fall down
Hush me Soothe me (Hush me is okay but I would as a native speaker say it like that in this context)
Say something
You have the power to end this storm
with just one word
Grasp Catch me
Hide me in your mind
Destroy every dark thought
With your light
I'm looking in your grave and gentle eyes
Nothing is gonna to terrify you terrifies you
I'm going to your side
And' you're going to mine
You raise you voice and start to smile
Calm down
I am
In your faith lies power
In your silence
Don't be afraid
Mind you, you're mine
You can trust me and go on despite this storm
Don't be afraid
I have you in my hands
You can trust me and go on
I'll be here
There were some things that I was a native speaker wouldn't say but other than that you did a great job translating! :)
Here is polish lyrics:
http://www.tekstowo.pl/piosenka,fisheclectic,ucisz_sie.html
And here is the song (to hear how is it's mood):
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MjVMsP9SXk8
Thanks a lot for every comment :)
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