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I translated song's lyrics... I want to comfort somebody so I translated a song from polish to english. Please, check if it's meaning is light: My thoughts are as a stormy sea And I don;t know how to stay among waves I see you like through a fog You're standing so calmly I'm calling you: don't let me to fall Hush me Say something You have power to end this storm with one word Grasp me Hide me in your mind Destroy every dark thought With your light I'm looking in your grave and gentle eyes Nothing is gonna to terrify you I'm going to your side And' you're going to my side You're smiling and starting to say: Calm down I am Power is in your faith In your silence Don't be afraid You're mine You can trust me and go on despite s storm Don't be afraid I hold you in my hands You can trust me and go on I'll be here Here is polish lyrics: http://www.tekstowo.pl/piosenka,fisheclectic,ucisz_sie.html And here is the song (to hear how is it's mood): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MjVMsP9SXk8 Thanks a lot for every comment :)

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I translated song's lyrics...

I want to comfort somebody so I translated a song from polish to english. Please, check if it's meaning is light:

My thoughts are like a stormy sea
And I don't know how to stay in the middle of these waves

I see you like through the fog
You're standing so calm
I'm calling you: don't let me to fall down

Hush me   Soothe me (Hush me is okay but I would as a native speaker say it like that in this context)
Say something
You have the power to end this storm

with just one word

Grasp  Catch me
Hide me in your mind
Destroy every dark thought
With your light

I'm looking in your grave and gentle eyes
Nothing is gonna to terrify you terrifies you

I'm going to your side
And' you're going to mine
You raise you voice and start to smile

Calm down
I am

In your faith lies power
In your silence
Don't be afraid
Mind you, you're mine
You can trust me and go on despite this storm

Don't be afraid
I have you in my hands
You can trust me and go on
I'll be here

 

There were some things that I was a native speaker wouldn't say but other than that you did a great job translating! :)

Here is polish lyrics:
http://www.tekstowo.pl/piosenka,fisheclectic,ucisz_sie.html

And here is the song (to hear how is it's mood):
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MjVMsP9SXk8

Thanks a lot for every comment :)

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Oh, I forgot about the most important verse: There's a silence around me Where are my enemies? Storm and wind surrended Here on a glassy sea I rainbow of your glory I'm standing and don't have to be afraid

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