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Aarón´s Day Hi everyone, This time I´d like to talk about my day, I woke up at 6;00 o´clock, I had a breakfast...only cereal with milk, although I would have liked eat "Chilaquiles" (the best breaksfast in Mexico) After that, I went to work , I love my job. I´m learning a lot of things but I just work half of time because I´m studying at the University. When I arrived at home I saw 2 episode od Breaking Band...each episode is better. Finally I´m writing this letter for you!!! Have a nice day.

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Aarón´s Day

Hi everyone,

This time I´d like to talk about my day,

I woke up at 6;00 o´clock, I had a breakfast...only cereal with milk, although I would have liked to eat "Chilaquiles" (the best breaksfast in Mexico)

After that, I went to work , I love my job. I´m learning a lot of things but I just work half of the time because I´m studying at the University.


When I arrived at home I saw 2 episodes of Breaking Band...each episode is better.

Finally I´m writing this letter for you!!! Have a nice day.

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Aarón's Day

Hi everyone,

This time I´d like to talk about my day,

I woke up at 6 o´clock, I had breakfast...only cereal with milk, although I would have liked to eat "Chilaquiles" (the best breakfast in Mexico)

After that, I went to work. I love my job. I´m learning a lot of things but I only work half of the time because I´m studying at University.


When I arrived at home I watched 2 episodes of Breaking Bad...each episode is better than the last.

Finally, I´m writing this letter for you!!! Have a nice day.

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Aarón´s Day   [It's customary to write words in English without the accent marks.  So in writing your name in English, it would be Aaron.]

 

Hi everyone,

This time I´d like to talk about my day. 

I woke up at 6:00 o´clock. I had a breakfast --- only cereal with milk, although I would have liked to eat "chilaquiles" (the best breakfast in Mexico)

After that, I went to work.  I love my job. I´m learning a lot of things, but I just work half time, because I´m studying at a University.    Here's a good variant in American English:  .... half-time, because I go to college.


When I arrived at home, I watched two episodes of Breaking Bad...each episode is better than the previous one.   [You didn't tell us each episode is better than what.  So I guessed at what you meant.] 

Finally, I´m writing this letter for you!!! Have a nice day.

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Aarón´s Day

Hi everyone,

This time I´d like to talk about my day,

I woke up at 6;00 o´clock(you either say "6:00" or "6 o'clock"). I had a breakfast...only cereal with milk, although I would have liked eat "Chilaquiles" (the best breaksfast in Mexico)

After that, I went to work. I love my job. I´m learning a lot of things but I just work half of the time because I´m studying at the University.


When I arrived ("arrived" technically works, but "got" sounds more natural) home I saw 2 episode of Breaking Band...each episode is better (either "good" or "better than the one before").

Finally I´m writing this letter for you!!! Have a nice day.

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