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Aarón´s Day
Hi everyone,
This time I´d like to talk about my day,
I woke up at 6;00 o´clock, I had a breakfast...only cereal with milk, although I would have liked to eat "Chilaquiles" (the best breaksfast in Mexico)
After that, I went to work , I love my job. I´m learning a lot of things but I just work half of the time because I´m studying at the University.
When I arrived at home I saw 2 episodes of Breaking Band...each episode is better.
Finally I´m writing this letter for you!!! Have a nice day.
Aarón's Day
Hi everyone,
This time I´d like to talk about my day,
I woke up at 6 o´clock, I had breakfast...only cereal with milk, although I would have liked to eat "Chilaquiles" (the best breakfast in Mexico)
After that, I went to work. I love my job. I´m learning a lot of things but I only work half of the time because I´m studying at University.
When I arrived at home I watched 2 episodes of Breaking Bad...each episode is better than the last.
Finally, I´m writing this letter for you!!! Have a nice day.
Aarón´s Day [It's customary to write words in English without the accent marks. So in writing your name in English, it would be Aaron.]
Hi everyone,
This time I´d like to talk about my day.
I woke up at 6:00 o´clock. I had a breakfast --- only cereal with milk, although I would have liked to eat "chilaquiles" (the best breakfast in Mexico)
After that, I went to work. I love my job. I´m learning a lot of things, but I just work half time, because I´m studying at a University. Here's a good variant in American English: .... half-time, because I go to college.
When I arrived at home, I watched two episodes of Breaking Bad...each episode is better than the previous one. [You didn't tell us each episode is better than what. So I guessed at what you meant.]
Finally, I´m writing this letter for you!!! Have a nice day.
Aarón´s Day
Hi everyone,
This time I´d like to talk about my day,
I woke up at 6;00 o´clock(you either say "6:00" or "6 o'clock"). I had a breakfast...only cereal with milk, although I would have liked eat "Chilaquiles" (the best breaksfast in Mexico)
After that, I went to work. I love my job. I´m learning a lot of things but I just work half of the time because I´m studying at the University.
When I arrived ("arrived" technically works, but "got" sounds more natural) home I saw 2 episode of Breaking Band...each episode is better (either "good" or "better than the one before").
Finally I´m writing this letter for you!!! Have a nice day.
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