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Please correct it!
Nightingale sings in the rain (Titles are always capitalized)
June, the winds are breaking my vassel. I’m sitting here and remembering about my vague memories. Some melodious piano sounds make me miss him more.
That It was a rainy day, the day a I had to leave my puppy love behind. I prepared my luggage ready and waited for the bus. The A hand touched my shoulder. A little astonished, he gave me a tender look and said, "Don’t you think you are leaving something here?"
I didn’t answer his question, just looked. The despair was written all over his face, he gave me the bag and came back.
I opened the bag which he gave me after I got on the bus. That’s the book, the novel which name Inside was a book, a novel called 'The Nightingale Sings I0n The Rain'. Oh my god, my tears began falling. I well knew understood well his intention. (or: I understood the meaning.) I left this book there, but it wasn't important, I can buy the same book at every bookstore. The most important I left there was him!
I’m in the first year of the university, so I had to have a month at the solidarity academy if we want to graduate.
To be continued.........
Hi Kai. Stories are a little hard to correct because it is hard to do so without mistakenly changing intention behind the sentence. I tried my best. Hope this was helpful.
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