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Salma - great work! The majority of your sentences are perfect. Next time, try to extend your writing to creating longer sentences using connectives (such as "and" and "but").
Good luck, Tom
Hello people! :)
Speak them a little of my. I will tell you a little about me.
My name's Salma, I'm a Graphic Designer. I was born in Colombia, I grew up in the Cartagena City. I'm 22 years old. I have 2 siblings, Paola and Javier, and I have a nephew. His name's Luis Alfonso and he's 5 years old. He's the son of my sister Paola. Paola's 31 and Javier is 28 years old. I have a boyfriend, his name's Jeffrey, he's 23 years old and he's a Systems Engineer. We're very much in love and we have been together for 7 years. 7 years of relationship.
Hello people! :)
I'll speak a little about myself.
My name's Salma, I'm a graphic Designer. I was born in Colombia, I grew up in the Cartagena (City). I'm 22 years old. I have 2 siblings, Paola and Javier, and I have a nephew, his name's Luis Alfonso and he's 5 years old, he's the son of my sister Paola. Paola's 31 and Javier is 28 years old. I have a boyfriend, his name's Jeffrey, he's 23 years old and he's a systems engineer, we're very much in love and we have been together for 7 years.
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