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A frightened pigeon came in through my window It was early morning and I was sleeping in my room. Suddenly I heard a noise and "something" came in through my window! I fell out of my bed and started screaming because I didn't know what the hell was going on, so I took a broom to defend myself against whatever was under my bed. When I looked at under my bed I saw a poor, little and frightened pigeon. It was seriously injured to his left wing and it was so sick, probably it was passing away. I didn't know how to help that poor animal, so I called my brother and immediately he picked up the pigeon, put it into a box and he realesed it in a near garden. It was a strange day and I was so sorry for that poor pigeon. Unfortunately if a pigeon is seriously injured you can't help it at all and also a vet can't help you because he isn't qualified on birds. Probably in the countryside you can find a vet that is specialized on all kind of animals.

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A frightened pigeon came in through my window

 

It was early morning and I was sleeping in my room. Suddenly I heard a noise and "something" came in through my window! I fell out of (my) bed and started screaming because I didn't know what the hell was going on, so I took/ grabbed a broom to defend myself against whatever was under my bed. When I looked at under my bed I saw a poor, little, and frightened pigeon. It was seriously injured to His left wing was seriously injured and it was so sick, probably it was passing away that it looked like it was dying. I didn't know how to help that the poor animal, so I called my brother and he immediately he picked up the pigeon, put it into a box and he released it into a near(by) garden. It was a strange day and I was so sorry for that poor pigeon. Unfortunately if a pigeon is seriously injured you can't help it at all and also a vet can't help you either because he isn't qualified on to treat birds. Probably/ I imagine that in the countryside you can find a vet that is specialized on in all kind of animals.

 

Nice job :-)

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Thank you XD
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Wow, that is quite a story! Also you wrote this quite well.

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