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My daily life I am the cashier in an advertising company.9 AM to work,go off work at 5:30,live a regular life.The most relaxing weekends,I usually spend it on my bed.Sometimes,I dream that I will have a different life,I don't have to work with computer,calculator,account books etc.Maybe my life will be full of color and artistic fell.

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My daily life

I am the cashier in an advertising company. At 9 AM I go to work, get off work at 5:30, and live a regular life. I spend most weekends relaxing, X usually spend it on my bed. Sometimes, I dream that I will have a different life, I won't have to work with computers, a calculator, and accounting books etc. Maybe my life will be full of color and feel artistic fell.

 

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At 9 AM I go to work, get off work at 5:30 and live a regular life.

I have two dogs, a cat and a pet fish.

 

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Hello. I reading your note... Who are you want to become? You like art, but you to being a cashier, why the weekends you don't live for art?

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