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另一台笔记本进入 我今天走了在我的镇。 吃了一盘鸡蛋炒饭在餐厅因为饿了。 我喜欢中国菜!

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今天走在自家小镇上,感觉饿了,就在餐厅吃了一盘鸡蛋炒饭。我喜欢中国菜/中国菜真好吃!

 

Hi,luuka!

you've done a great job as a starter, wish I was as good as you when I first started to learn english. But here is my advise:

Go and buy a grammar book: the logic and grammar between chinese and english are so different. In order to truly master another language, you have to constitute a sentence properly and never let any translation software to do your job.

 

your sincerely 

                                                                    jimmy chen

 

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另一台笔记本进入条日记簿(笔记簿、笔记本)条目[1]

我今天走了在我的镇子上, 我因为饿了在一家餐厅吃了一盘鸡蛋炒饭在餐厅因为饿了。 我喜欢中国菜!

[1]Here "notebook" should be translated into "日记本" or "笔记簿". 'Entry' should be translated into '条目' or '笔记', which means a piece of writing in diary.

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另一台笔记本进入 开始写第一篇小作文 Get Started to Write the First Essay


我今天在走了在我居住的镇上 走了走。[Sorry...but "我的镇" sounds ike "镇" is your personal place in Chinese]

我在餐厅吃了一盘鸡蛋炒饭/蛋炒饭 [Yes, if you say "蛋炒饭" is also right and we Chinese always say"蛋炒饭", we think "蛋" means chincken eggs in "蛋炒饭"]是因为饿了。

我喜欢中国菜!

 

因为……所以

因为我饿了,所以我在餐厅吃了蛋炒饭。

somebody do/does/did something……是因为

我在餐厅吃了饭,是因为我饿了。

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Your title should be “另一条日记簿(笔记本、笔记簿)条目”。
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我今天在镇上的餐厅吃了一盘蛋炒饭,因为饿了。 我喜欢中国菜!

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