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我虚荣的同事
说到肤色,印尼华人普遍比印尼本地人白。
在去办公室途中,我看见了一个同事 。好奇怪,今天她一瘸一拐地走。
「发生什么事了?」我问她了。
「昨晚滑倒了,我把脚踝扭了一下,」她回答了。
「你真可怜!」我抓住她的手,想扶她走。
「不,不,不,不行,」 她拒绝了。她看我很困惑,就说:「抱歉,被别人看我们手拉着手不好。他们肯定要比较我们的肤色。」
她是印尼本地人,我是印尼华人。我明白了,笑着放手了。原来我也是一个虚荣的女孩。
My Vain Colleague
Talking about 说到 skin color, the one of Indonesian-born-Chinese is generally 普遍 fairer than that of native 本地人 Indonesian .
This morning, on the way to my office, I saw a colleague walking lamely 一瘸一拐地.
"What happened?" I asked her.
"I fell off and twisted my ankle last night," she answered.
"Poor you!" I grabbed her hand, with the intention to help her walk.
"No no no don't," she refused, and seeing my baffled face, she added: "Sorry, but if people see us hand-in-hand, they'll compare our skin color."
She was native Indonesian, while I had Chinese descent. With the understanding of her point, I smiled and dropped her hand. After all, I was another vain girl. (The sentence order changed)
我虚荣的同事
谈谈肤色,印尼华人平时的比印尼本地人的更白。
去办公室途中的,我看见了一个同事 。奇怪,今天她一瘸一拐地走。
「发生什么事了?」我问她了。
「昨晚滑倒了,我把脚踝扭了一下,」她回答了。
「可怜的你(你真可憐)!」我抓住她的手想帮助她走。
「不,不,不,不行,」 她拒绝了。她当看了我很困惑的樣子,就说:「抱歉,别人看我们手拉着手是不好的。他们肯定要把你的肤色比作我的。」
她 是印尼本地人,我是印尼华人。我笑了,放手了她。明白了。我到底也是一个虚荣的女孩。
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印尼本人用印尼人就可以了,如果要強調原住民,可以用印尼當地人或印尼本地人。
另外,可以跟我說說膚色不同為什麼是虛榮的表現呢?
我虚荣的同事
谈谈肤色,印尼华人平时的比印尼本人的更白。
去办公室途中的,我看见了一个 同事 。奇怪,今天她(走路)一瘸一拐地走(的)。
「发生什么事了?」我问她。
「昨晚滑倒了,我把脚踝扭了一下,」她回答。
「可怜的你!」我抓住她手想帮她走。
「不,不,不,不行,」 她拒绝了。她当看了我很困惑,就说:「抱歉,别人看我们手拉着手是不好的。他们肯定要把你的肤色比作我的。」
她 是印尼本人,我是印尼华人。我笑了,放手了她。明白了。我到底也是一个虚荣的女孩。
my vain colleague
Talking about skin, Indonesian-born-Chinese' is generally fairer than those of native Indonesian's.
This morning, on the way to my office, I saw a colleague walking funny.
"What happened?" I asked her.
"I slipped and twisted my ankle last night," she answered.
"Poor you!" I grabbed her hand, intending to help her walk.
"No no no don't," she refused, and upon seeing my baffled face, added: "Sorry, but if people see us hand-in-hand, they'll compare the tone of your skin to mine."
She was native to Indonesia, while I am of Chinese descent. I let go of her hand and laughed. I, understanding her point, was also a vain girl after all.
我虚荣的同事
谈谈肤色,印尼华人平时的比印尼本人的更白。
去办公室途中的,我看见了一个 同事 。奇怪,今天她走路一瘸一拐的地走。
「发生什么事了?」我问她了。
「昨晚滑倒了,我把脚踝扭了一下,」她回答了。
「真可怜的你!」我抓住她手想扶帮她走。
「不,不,不,不行,」 她拒绝了。她当看到了我很困惑,就说:「抱歉,别人看我们手拉着手是不好的。他们肯定要把你的肤色以为是比作我的。」
她 是印尼本人,我是印尼华人。我笑了,放手了她。明白了。我说到底,我也是一个虚荣的女孩。
我虚荣的同事
谈谈谈起肤色,印尼华人平时的比印尼本人的本地人更白。
去办公室途中的,我看见了一个 同事 。奇怪,今天她怎么(just to make the sentence fluent)一瘸一拐地走。
「发生什么事了?」我问她了。for quote, it is better to use "" instead of 「」
「昨晚滑倒了,我把脚踝扭了一下,」她回答了。
「可怜的你!」"哦,小可怜“ or ”哦,真可怜“ in Chinese exclamatory sentence ustually start or end with an exclamation我抓住她手想帮她走。
「不,不,不,不行,」 她拒绝了。她当看了当她看到我很困惑,就解释说:「抱歉,但是(but)如果(if)别人看到我们手拉着手是不好的。,他们肯定要把你的肤色比作我的。和我的做比较」
她 是印尼本人,我是印尼华人。我笑了,放手了她放开了她的手。明白了。我到底也是一个虚荣的女孩。
my vain colleague
Talking about skin, Indonesian-born-Chinese' is generally fairer than those of native Indonesian's.
This morning, on the way to my office, I saw a colleague walking funny.
"What happened?" I asked her.
"I slipped and twisted my ankle last night," she answered.
"Poor you!" I grabbed her hand, intending to help her walk.
"No no no don't," she refused, and upon seeing my baffled face, added: "Sorry, but if people see us hand-in-hand, they'll compare the tone of your skin to mine."
She was native to Indonesia, while I am of Chinese descent. I let go of her hand and laughed. I, understanding her point, was also a vain girl after all.
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