I do dance

Hi. Thank you for the corrections on my last article, I appreciate it. So today I had a dance lesson. I've been taking a dance class since I was 9. I'm bad at sports so dancing is only one of my hobbies I could say. I (am good at/OR/enjoy) hip hop dance, jazz dance and reggae. Dancing told taught me not only how to move but also how to connect to with people. Thanks to taking Attending a the dance class, I had gave me a lot of opportunities to talk to wide age range of people of all ages, so I'm good at making friends. I think having something a hobby is very important. thing.

Well done! Your english is really good, it's only really your phrasing that needed corrected. ^-^

Lia

I do dance.

Hi. Thank you for the correcting on my last article, I appreciate it. So today I had a dance lesson. I've been taking a dance classes since I was 9. I'm bad at sports so dancing is only one of the few hobbies that I have, I could say. I dance hip hop dance, jazz dance and reggae. Dancing taught me not only how to move but also how to connect to people. Thanks to taking a dance classes, I have had a lot of opportunities to talk to wide age of people(it means younger than me, same age and older than my age but I don't know how to write it. Could you tell me?). So I'm good at making friends. I think having a hobby is an important thing.

Good job!

--Ravi.

I do dance

Hi. Thank you for the correction on my last article. I appreciate it. So today I had a dance lesson. I've been taking a dance class since I was 9. I'm bad at sports so dancing is only one of my hobbies I could say. I do hip hop dance, jazz dance and reggae. Dancing taught me not only how to move but also how to connect with people. Thanks to taking a dance class, I had a lot of opportunities to talk to a wide range of people. I'm good at making friends and I think having a hobby is an important thing.