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My Couchsurfing profile (well, this is a good exercise too :)
I have lived in Lyon since for about two years, and I really love this city! Previously I grown grew up in the region of Tours then I lived in Nice, Toulouse and Paris.
I'm trying to speak more fluent English more fluently so that I can work et and share with people from the whole world. So I wish I could would like to speak English with you if you are willing to, even if sometimes you will have to be patient :).
My roommate welcomed invited two couchsurfers to stay with us, with whom, in the end, I spentd some time chatting, and with the second one making helping her discover Lyon .
(We almost never use the word "whom" in English any more, though it is still understood. I would change the previous statement to be something like the following:
"My roommate invited two couchsurfers to stay with us. I spent some time chatting to both of them including helping one of them to discover Lyon.")
I really liked sharing doing this, and also receiving and hanging around with people (While this is correct, it would be more natural to say - "I really liked helping her, as well as spending time and talking with new people".
So I have decided to reactivate my CS account!
What I Can Share With Hosts Guests:
Making Helping them to discovering Lyon, including the best places to see and nice some great bars :).
Thanks for correcting me!
My Couchsurfing profile (well, this is a good exercise too :)
I live in Lyon since about two years, and I really love this city! Previously I was grown up in the region of Tours after that I lived in Nice, Toulouse and Paris.
I'm trying to be more fluent in English so that I can work and share with the peoples from the whole world. So I wish I could speak English with you if you are willing to, even if sometimes you will have to be patient :).
My roommate welcomed two couchsurfers with whom later I spend some time chatting, and with the second one making her discovering Lyon. I really liked sharing this, and also welcoming and hanging around with people. So I have decided to reactivate my CS account!
What I Can Share With Hosts :
Making them discovering Lyon, places to see and nice bars :).
Thanks for correcting me!
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