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With friends I ate dinner with friends. One of them lately got a job. He said that the job is hard but very fun. I thought person who close in dream has halo. I paid dinner. I wanted to cheer him. In a bus for coming back home, I was happy.

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With friends

I ate dinner with friends. One of them RECENTLY got a job. He says that the job is hard but very fun.

I THINK A person who (close in dream) (FINDS HIS DREAM) has A halo. I paid FOR dinner. I wanted to cheer him UP.

In THE bus WHILE coming back home, I was happy.

 

 

 

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With friends

I ate had dinner with some friends. One of them lately recently got a job. He said that the job is hard but very fun. (suggestion: He said that even though the job is hard, it is still very fun)

I thought think that a person who close in to his   people who reach their dream have a halo/are glowing. I paid for dinner. I wanted to cheer him.


In a the bus for coming back to go home, I was happy.

 

Good job! :)

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