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My very first journal Hi. This is my very first time to write something in English here! My friend who is Canadian told me about this website so I decided to sign up for this yesterday. I really don't know what to write about.... ok so let me just write what happened today! Today was very important day for me cause I had an English exam. It was for my university (I'm a high school student) so I had to get high score! I had prepared for this since last month. It wasn't only reading test. I took listening test, writing test and speaking test too! I don't know how much scores I got yet but I think I did pretty good :) I'm looking forward to seeing the result! After the exams, I went shopping with my dad. We always go somewhere on every weekend. We're like friends. Dad bought me some cloths that I wanted. Thanks! We had a dinner after our shopping. Today's dinner was Indian curry. We really enjoyed it. Ok my journal is getting boring haha I still have to prepare for exams that are coming next week! It's also for university so wish me luck! I would be very happy if you teach me English. Thank you for reading.

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My very first journal

Hi. This is my very first time writing something in English here! My Canadian friend who is Canadian told me about this website so I decided to sign up for this yesterday. I really don't know what to write about.... ok so let me just write about what happened today! Today was a very important day for me because I had an English exam. It was for my university (or "it was to get into university") (I'm currently a high school student) so I had to get a high score! I had been preparing for this since last month. It wasn't only a reading test. I took a listening test, a writing test and a speaking test too! I don't know how much my scores I got yet but I think I did pretty well :) I'm looking forward to seeing the results! After the exams, I went shopping with my dad. We always go somewhere on every the weekend. We're like friends. Dad bought me some clothes that I wanted. Thanks! We had a dinner after our shopping. Today's dinner was Indian curry. We really enjoyed it. Ok my journal is getting boring haha I still have to prepare for exams that are coming next week! It's also for university so wish me luck! I would be very happy if you could teach me English. Thank you for reading.

Hi! You're English sounds really good :) One comment is that when you say "We always go somewhere on every weekend", 'always' and 'every' together is a bit repetitive, so you would say either "We always go somewhere on the weekend" OR "We go somewhere every weekend". And note that with 'every weekend' you don't need 'on'.

Good luck with your exam!! I would be happy to help you more with your English :)
 

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My very first journal

Hi. This is my very first time writing something in English on here! My friend who is Canadian told me about this website so I decided to sign up for this yesterday. I really don't know what to write about.... ok so let me just write what happened today! Today was a very important day for me cause I had an English exam. It was for my university (I'm a high school student) so I had to get high score! I had prepared (had been preparing) for this since last month. It wasn't only reading test. I took a listening test, writing test and speaking test too! I don't know how much what scores I got yet but I think I did pretty good :) I'm looking forward to seeing the result! After the exams, I went shopping with my dad. We always go somewhere on every weekend. We're like friends. Dad bought me some clothes that I wanted. Thanks! We had a dinner after our shopping. Today's dinner was Indian curry. We really enjoyed it. Ok my journal is getting boring haha I still have to prepare for exams that are coming next week! It's also for university so wish me luck! I would be very happy if you teach me English. Thank you for reading.

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My first journal

Hi, Here is my  first time to write something in English! My friend, who is Canadian told me about this website so, I decided to sign up for this ,yesterday. I really don't know what to write .... ok?

So, let me just write that what happened today?

Today was very important day for me because I had an English exam. It was for my university (I'm a high school student) so, I  had to get high score! I had prepared for this since last month. It wasn't only reading test. I gave listening test, writing test and speaking test too! I don't know how much scores I got yet but I think, I did pretty good :) I'm looking forward to seeing the result! After the exams, I went to shopping with my dad. We always go somewhere on every weekend. We're like a  friends. Dad bought me some clothes that I wanted. Thanks! We had a dinner after the shopping. Today's dinner was Indian curry. We really enjoyed it. Ok my journal is getting boring haha I still have to prepare for exams that are coming from next week! It's also for university So, wish me luck! I would be very happy if you teach me English. Thanks for the reading.

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Good luck!
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Good luck, hope you do well in your English tests. Your English level seems pretty good, but I have made a few small corrections which would make your writing sound more native.

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