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A day in the beach i live in the south of Andalousia near Cadiz coast. Last saturday i went to the Barrosa beach in Chiclana. It's a beautiful place: water is clean and cold, sun shines so much and sand is golden. We went with my friends by car. The travel was warm because temperature was really high. We took a swim, played cards and ate some fruit. I like eating fruit in the beach because it is refreshing. Obviously, we ate more food too. It's very important to protect ourselves of sun so I always take sunscreen in my beach bag. Sunbathe is unhealthy from 12 pm until 18 pm. We must avoid that hours to keep a healthy skin. Then, we played football and we decided to come back home. It was a relaxing day. I was so tired but very happy.

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A day at the beach

I live in the south of Andalousia near Cadiz coast. Last Saturday i went to the Barrosa beach in Chiclana. It's a beautiful place:the  water is clean and cold, the sun shines a lot, and the sand is golden. We went with my friends by car. The trip was warm because the temperature was really high.
We took a swim, played cards and ate some fruit. I like eating fruit at the beach because it is refreshing. Obviously, we ate more food too.
It's very important to protect ourselves from the sun so I always take sunscreen in my beach bag. Sunbathing is unhealthy from 12 pm until 18 pm. We must avoid that hours to keep a healthy skin.
Then, we played football and we decided to come back home. It was a relaxing day. I was so tired but very happy.

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Well done, Kayra. You wrote an excellent text that captures the emotion of going to the beach. I went to Marbella yesterday, but by the time I arrived it was already too hot so my friend and I found a lovely bar and had some cold drinks. 

 

A day in at the beach

I live in the south of Andalusia near the Cadiz coast. Last saturday I went to the Barrosa beach in Chiclana. It's a beautiful place: the water is clean and cold, the sun shines so much a lot/every day and the sand is golden. We I went with my friends by car. The travel drive was warm hot/uncomfortable/exhausting because the temperature was really high. 

We took had a swim, played cards and ate some fruit. I like eating fruit in at the beach because it is refreshing. Obviously, we ate more food too.
It's very important to protect ourselves of from the sun so I always take sunscreen in my beach bag. Sunbathing is unhealthy from 12 pm until 18 pm. We must avoid these/those hours to keep our skin healthy skin.
Then, we played football and we decided to come back home. It was a relaxing day. I was so tired but very happy.

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It was a perfect day :)
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Hi, Kayra, is a fantastic plan to summer season. I am to be honest, but I feel a bit a jealous for you..I'm working a lot in the workplace, then maybe in three or fourth months I am gonna take my holiday period. You ko,w, I hope so!!! I wish you a big day!!! hugs and kisses Kayra.

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