In a bus
I should go to school for returning books. I saw HAN river in a bus. the surface twinkled.
I was deep in thought. What do I have lunch? I wanted to eat some delicious things.
finally I got a thinking. `I will eat a noodle.`
after getting off the bus, I went to noodle restaurant. I thought that people are borned for eatting.
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In a bus
I should go to school to return some books. I saw the Han river in a bus. The surface twinkled.
I was deep in thought. What do I have for lunch? I wanted to eat some delicious things.
Finally I had a thought. `I will eat a noodles.`
After getting off the bus, I went to a noodle restaurant. I thought that people are born for eating.
[Good job. You could have said either 'I will eat noodles' or 'I will eat a bowl of noodles'. Actually, we usually say 'I will HAVE noodles.', with eating being understood.]
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