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Just something about me I don't know what should I write in notebook . Apparently , I 'm kind of a shy guys , not get use to share much thing with other before .So, only thing I can share is introduce myself ,even though I already wrote it in the set up my account part . Sometime I 'm really want to change my personality , I want to be a outgoing guy I mean active guys who likes play basketball rather than stay at home watching movie .But now I still not give up ,still try myself best to change . I think that is all I can share right now .

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Just something about me

I don't know what should I write in notebook . Apparently, I'm kind of a shy guys singular!, not get get is used for transitional statments, to get used to something implies you are not used to it beforehand but now are. used to share muchmany things is countable things with other before.

 

So, only thing I can share is introduce myselfmy self introduction you have to share a noun, not a verb, even though I already wrote it in the set up my account part . Sometime I 'm really want to change my personality, I want to be a outgoing guy, I mean active guys who likes play basketball rather than stay at home watching movies. But now I still notwon't give up, I still try myself best to change. I think that is all I can share right now.

Thank you for your thoughts, very personal stuff! Be careful with your spacing, you need a space after a comma "," or full stop "." not afterwards. "I'm" is also written as one word without spacing. 

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Just something about me

I don't know what should I write in (my/the) notebook . Apparently, I 'm kind of a shy guy  and not get used to sharing much thing with others before . So the only thing I can share do is to introduce myself. Even though I already wrote it in the set-up of my account part. Sometimes, I  really want to change my personality. I want to be a outgoing guy. I mean an active guy who likes to play basketball rather than stay at home watching a movie. But now I still will not give up. I still will try my best to change . I think that is all I can share right now. 

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