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폐암에 걸리다 정윤이 폐암에 걸려요. 의사들은 6개월 정도 밖에 살지 못한다고 했어요. 그 누구도, 의사조차, 정윤을 도와줄 수 있어요. 30년 동안 담배를 피웠어요. 담배를 끊고 안 싶어해서 계속 담배를 많이 피웠어요. 살아 있는 한, 담배를 끊지 못할 것였대요. 몇 년 전에 의사가 휴식을 취하고 담배를 끊어야 했대요. 그래도 충고를 무시해서 계속 담배를 피웠어요. “아우, 내 걱정 하지마, 나는 괜찮아”라고 했어요. 지금 폐암에 걸리다 해도 하루에 한 갑 계속 피워요. 정윤은 “왜 안돼?”하고 물어봤어요. Based off of this text (from http://www.rong-chang.com/nse/) Paula has cancer. She has six months to live. Her doctors cannot help her. No one can help her. She smoked cigarettes for 30 years. She did not want to stop smoking cigarettes. The doctors told her to stop smoking many years ago. She didn’t listen to them. She didn’t listen to her parents. She didn’t listen to her children. She didn’t listen to her friends. Everyone told her to stop smoking. She told everyone to stop worrying about her. She would be fine, she told them. She still smokes every day. Why not, she asks.

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폐암에 걸렸어요.

정윤이가 폐암에 걸렸어요.

의사들이 6개월 정도 밖에 살지 못한다고 했어요.

그 누구도, 의사조차도, 정윤이를 도와줄 수 없어요.

그(?)는30년 동안 담배를 피웠어요.

담배를 끊고 싶어 하였지만, 그는 계속 담배를 피웠어요.

살아 있는 한, 담배를 끊지 못할 것 같았데요.

몇 년 전에 의사가 휴식을 취하고 담배를 끊어야 한다고 했대요.

그래도 충고를 무시하고 계속 담배를 피웠어요.

“아우, 내 걱정 하지마, 나는 괜찮아”

라고 했어요.

지금 폐암에 걸리고 나서도 그는 계속 하루에 한 갑을 피워요.

정윤이는

“왜 안돼?”

하고 물어봤어요.

Based off of this text (from http://www.rong-chang.com/nse/)
Paula has cancer. She has six months to live. Her doctors cannot help her. No one can help her. She smoked cigarettes for 30 years. She did not want to stop smoking cigarettes. The doctors told her to stop smoking many years ago. She didn’t listen to them. She didn’t listen to her parents. She didn’t listen to her children. She didn’t listen to her friends. Everyone told her to stop smoking. She told everyone to stop worrying about her. She would be fine, she told them. She still smokes every day. Why not, she asks.

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폐암에 걸리다

 

정윤이 폐암에 걸렸어요. 의사들은 6개월 정도 밖에 살지 못한다고 했어요.

그 누구도, 의사조차,(/의사를 포함하여 그 누구도) 정윤을 도와줄 수 없어요. 정윤은 30년 동안 담배를 피웠어요.

 

담배를 끊고 안 싶어해서 계속 담배를 많이 피웠어요.

담배를 끊을 생각을 전혀 하지 않고, 계속 담배를 많이 피웠어요.

 

살아 있는 한, 담배를 끊지 못할 것이라고 했어요. 몇 년 전에 의사가 휴식을 취하고 담배를 끊어야 한다고 했어요. 그래도 충고를 무시하고 계속 담배를 피웠어요. “아유, 내 걱정 하지마, 나는 괜찮아”라고 했어요. 지금 폐암에 걸렸는대도 하루에 한 갑씩 계속 피워요. 정윤은 “왜 안돼?”라고 물어봤어요(/반문해요). 


Based off of this text (from http://www.rong-chang.com/nse/)
Paula has cancer. She has six months to live. Her doctors cannot help her. No one can help her. She smoked cigarettes for 30 years. She did not want to stop smoking cigarettes. The doctors told her to stop smoking many years ago. She didn’t listen to them. She didn’t listen to her parents. She didn’t listen to her children. She didn’t listen to her friends. Everyone told her to stop smoking. She told everyone to stop worrying about her. She would be fine, she told them. She still smokes every day. Why not, she asks.

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폐암에 걸리다

정윤이 폐암에 걸렸어려요. 의사들은 6개월 정도 밖에 살지 못한다고 했어요. 그 누구도, 의사조차, 정윤을 도와줄 수 없어요.있어요. 30년 동안 담배를 피웠어요. 담배를 안 끊고 안 싶어해서 계속 담배를 많이 피웠어요. 살아 있는 한, 담배를 끊지 못하겠대요. 할 것였대요. 몇 년 전에 의사가 휴식을 취하고 담배를 끊으라고 했대요. 어야 했대요. 그래도 충고를 무시하고해서 계속 담배를 피웠어요. “아우, 내 걱정 하지마, 나는 괜찮아”라고 했어요. 지금 폐암에 걸렸다고리다 해도 하루에 한 갑씩 계속 피워요. 정윤은 “왜 안돼?”하고 물어봤어요.

Based off of this text (from http://www.rong-chang.com/nse/)
Paula has cancer. She has six months to live. Her doctors cannot help her. No one can help her. She smoked cigarettes for 30 years. She did not want to stop smoking cigarettes. The doctors told her to stop smoking many years ago. She didn’t listen to them. She didn’t listen to her parents. She didn’t listen to her children. She didn’t listen to her friends. Everyone told her to stop smoking. She told everyone to stop worrying about her. She would be fine, she told them. She still smokes every day. Why not, she asks.

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