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the first day I feel a little bit shy to write English . Maybe there are many mistakes~ I hope to make more friends who come from different countries . I am willing to know more different cultures or to introduce Chinese culture to you . Thanks for your reading. I know it is very short~

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The First Day


I feel a little bit shy to write English .

I am a bit nervous to write in English.

 

Maybe there are many mistakes~

There may be a few mistakes~


I hope to make more friends who come from different countries.

I hope/want to make more friends who come from different countries.

 

I am willing to know more different cultures or to introduce Chinese culture to you.

I would like to know more about different cultures or introduce you to the Chinese culture/China. 


Thanks for your reading. I know it is very short.

Thanks for reading (this). I know it is very short.

 

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Your English is very good. Keep writing.

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