The Podemos effect (attempt two)

Spain is living a rupture of it's its party system, where there existed the hegemony of two parties until now; both are falling faililng because of their commitment to the adjustment policies which have been dismantling the welfare state, while they rescued the banks' banks [I don't think it's correct to use a possesive here, but if you are talking about something that belongs to the banks you need to be clearer as to what that is - it's not obvious from the context] ; furthermore, both are fully involved in a massive structural corruption issue. [Just a style note - having two semi-colons in one sentence is unusal. This would read better if you broke it into two or more sentences instead.]

On the other hand, Podemos is formed by people who have been fighting against the adjustments, against the evictions, claiming the rescue of the people instead of the banks. This is why Podemos is growing up, in just one year, they achieved five MEPs, and obtained the power in city halls all over the country, including the mayoralty in Barcelona, Madrid, Zaragoza, La Coruña and Cádiz.

They have serious possibilities [a common expression you could use here is "they have a real chance"] of winning the next general elections which will take place in November.

The people in around the world, who are struggling to save the planet and humanity from ourselves, are paying attention to Podemos' successes. While it is true that they pick up the Latin-American experience (our experience) from the last years of struggle against the neoliberalism, now their rise is feeding us and is renewing our morale and hopes, it's feedback with fresh winds.

Podemos is not going to have a measurable effect, say, in the next elections in Colombia which will happen in October. But the people in the leftwing political circles, we are talking about them, and thinking, “so, yes, we can” (podemos), so, as a result, the successes of Podemos are possibly helping to boost a huge movement right now, maybe, [as you've already said "possibly"] around Latin-America. Though we cannot see it's its impact before some years pass, it's true that a lot of people are awakening.

Another world is possible, we can change it.

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Nice entry - very well written for some challenging subject matter! I'm sure you know the rules for it's/its so I haven't explained them - but feel free to message me if you have any questions on my comments :)