Miou Miou's notebook entry: Feb 14, 2011
When i was a little girl,i swear when i'm older that i'll never be a boring old twit like the adults i see.But when i grow up,many things get terrible,and i aways fucked up all things.i wish i always be "peter pan",i want to grew up.I want keep my childhood(though it's not perfect).
I don't know what will i say.
Maybe i really got some problems.Maybe i'm screw-ups.....
Because i lost my childhood and everything connected with its memory.
so sad...
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Miou Miou's notebook entry: Feb 14, 2011
When i was a little girl,i swear when i'm older that i'll never be a boring old twit like the adults i see.But when i grow up,many things get terrible,and i aways fucked up all things.i wish i always be "peter pan",i want to grew up.I want keep my childhood(though it's not perfect).I don't know what will i say.
Maybe i really got some problems.Maybe i'm screw-ups.....
Because i lost my childhood and everything connected with its memory.
so sad...
You already have a correction but I’ll just show you how I would say the same thing in everyday language.
When I was a little girl I swore that when I was older I would never be a boring, old twit like the adults I see. But when I grew up things got pretty bad and I always messed up. I wish I could always be like Peter Pan. I want to grow up but I want to keep my childhood, too, even though it’s not perfect.
I don’t know what to say.
Maybe I really have a few problems. Maybe I’ve made a mess of things since I lost my childhood and my memories of it. So sad.
“To fuck up” is vulgar slang and not used publically by educated folk, although it is sometimes used in public by the young and anti-social to intentionally shock others.
“Screw up” is also slang, but more commonly heard.
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Miou Miou's notebook entry: Feb 14, 2011
When I was a little girl,II don't know what will I should say.
Maybe I really have got some problems.Maybe i'm screwed-up
Because I lost my childhood and everything connected with its memory.
so sad...
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Miou Miou's notebook entry: Feb 14, 2011
When i was a little girl,i swear when i'm older that i'll never be a boring old twit like the adults i see.But when i grow up,many things get terrible,and i aways fucked up all things.i wish i always be "peter pan",i don't want to grew up.I want keep my childhood(though it's not perfect).I don't know what will i say.
Maybe i really got some problems.Maybe i'm screw-ups.....
Because i lost my childhood and everything connected with its memory.
so sad...
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