Father's Day
Today is Father's Day.
I went to my parents' home and gave my father new pants.
He's glad to get it.
And also I was glad for surprise present for me.
My son and wife gave me a new clothes.
Today we had nice time^^
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Father's Day
Today is Father's Day.
I went to my parents' home and gave my father a new pair of pants.
He's glad to get accept it.
And also I was also glad for the surprise present for me.
My son and wife gave me a new clothes.
Today we had a nice time^^
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Father's Day
Today is Father's Day.
I went to my parents' home and gave my father new pants.
He's was glad to get it.
And also I was glad for because of surprise present for me. A surpise present made me glad, too.
My son and wife gave me a new clothes.
Today we had nice time^^
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new pants - this means more than one pair. If you gave him only one pair of pants, then "gave my father a pair of pants." is better.
Happy Father's Day! :)
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