THE MAGICAL NIGHT OF SAN JUAN

Only three days to San Juan!! It's a very special festival in Spain, that (which)is celebrated on the night of the 23thrd of June, or, in other words, near (close to) the summer solstice.

People, through this celebration,(if you insert a "," after people, you would need a "," after celebration. Alternatively, you could write, "Through this celebration, people ...") give welcome to the summer in a special and magical way... People They (to avoid repeating "people" ) go out to the streets or beaches (if your city has one) and make lots of fires so, . According to the tradition, you have to burn old things and jump over the fire (well, when it is almost finishingdying...). So, You can start (begin) this new time (period) saying bye bye goodbye to the bad old bad things are in your life and wish for new things in a positive way. (alternatively, wish for new positive things). For this reason, it's a tradition to write some wishes and keep them during a yearthroughtout the year and keep them for good luck. The whole things will give you good luck....

My city hasn't does not have a beach, but it has a river with an important sand area,; so, people go to this area to do make the fires near the water!! There are will be a lot of music bands playing life live music at in the background and bar-stalls, little movable pubs, where you can get a drink. The atmosphere is will be great!!

** Sounds like a fun party! Wish I could be there! :-) Enjoy!

THE MAGICAL NIGHT OF SAN JUAN

Only three days to San Juan!! It's a very special festival in Spain, that which is celebrated the night of the 23th of June, or, in other words, near the summer solstice.

People, through this celebration give welcome to the summer in a special and magical way... People go out to on the streets or beaches (if your city has one) and make lots of fires; so, according to the tradition, you have to burn old things and jump over the fire (well, when it is almost finishing finished...). So, you can start this new time season by saying bye bye to the old bad old things that are in your life and wish for new things in a positive way. For this reason, it's a tradition to write some wishes and keep them during for a year (or during the year). The whole All these things will give bring you good luck....

My city hasn't a beach (or has no beach), but it has a river with an important prominent (or significant) sand area (or sand bank); so, people go to this area to do start (or make or set) fires near the water river!! There are a lot of music bands playing life live music at in the background and bar-stalls, little movable pubs, where you can get a drink. The atmosphere is great!!

Sounds magical indeed! Very well written. My corrections are in red and my suggestions to sound more natural are in blue/grey.

THE MAGICAL NIGHT OF SAN JUAN

Only three days to San Juan!! It's a very special festival in Spain, that (which) is celebrated on the night of the 23th of June, or, in other words, near (around) the summer solstice.

People, through this celebration give welcome to the summer in a special and magical way... People go out on to the streets or beaches (if your city has one) and make lots of fires; so, according to the tradition, you have to burn old things and jump over the fire (well, when it has almost finished burning ing...). So, you can start this new time saying bye goodbye to the old, bad (bad, old sounds better!) things are in your life and wishing for new things in a positive way. For this reason, it's a tradition to write some wishes and keep them during a year* (during the year / for a year). The whole All these things will give you good luck....

My city doesn't have a beach, but it has a river with an important sandy area; so, people go to this area to do start/light/burn/make fires near the water/river!! There are a lot of music bands playing live music at in the background and bar-stalls, little movable pubs, where you can get a drink. The atmosphere is great!!

Rosa

A great piece of writing about what sounds like a fantastic festival!  Of course, it's soon the first day of summer in the Northern Hemisphere.  And of course, I have the impression that it's always summer over there in Spain!  I hope that you enjoy the festival and that you get some great summer weather!

An excellent entry!

Leigh