Corrections · 5
将棋はきれいです。
先日、将棋クラブがにいきました。
あそこで、日本人がに会いました。
すごいですね!?
でも、私ははにかみやです。
日本語を話しませんでした。
次回は多分。
If you are going to some place, we use に or へ as to.
ex. レストラン へ or に いきました。
I went to a restaurant.
While, が is for a person or animal who makes the action.
・Perosn or Animal が ~(place)に いきました。
Because 将棋クラブ is not living thing, and can't move itself,
so, you should use へ or は in this sentence:)
We use あそこ when we can look at , as like 'over there'.
In this sentence, you are talking about the past happen and it cannot be seen now,
then use そこで、そこに.
I yellow lined あそこ、日本人が会いました。 because I can correct this sentence in two different way.
①そこに、日本人がいました。 / There was (were) Japanese.
②そこで、日本人に会いました。/ I met Japanese person/people in that place.
Sorry I was not sure which one you ment. But both are basically explaining same thing:)
はにかみや this is really nice Japanese!
はずかしがりや(恥ずかしがり屋) is also the word for a person who is shy.( Maybe you already know....:)
次回は多分→ sounds more natural
Hope you can have conversation with Japanese people in 将棋クラブ next time^^
Also hope it helped you!
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