Thought
Simplicity is getting naked in front of the other ... And we have a lot of difficulties to be true with others. We have fear of being misunderstood, to appear frail, ending up at the mercy of who's in front. we never exhibit. Because we lack the strength to be human, what makes us accept our limitations, that we make them understand, giving it meaning and turning them into energy, under precisely. I love the simplicity that is accompanied with humility. I like the bums. I like people who can listen to the wind on your skin, you feel the smells of things, capturing the soul. Those who have the meat comes into contact with the meat in the world. Because there is truth, there is sweetness, there is sensitivity, there is still love.
(I try to translate this beatiful though of italian poet.. I think i do many mistakes, so thanks who help me)
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Thought
Simplicity is getting naked in front of the another ... And we have a lot of difficulties to be true to with others/OR to be truthful with others. We have a fear of being misunderstood, to appear frail, ending up at the mercy of who's in front. We never show off/brag exhibit. Because we lack the strength to be human, what makes us accept our limitations, that we to make them understood, giving them it meaning and turning them into energy, under precisely. I love the simplicity that is accompanied with humility. I like the bums/tramps?. I like people who can listen to the wind on their your skin, you who feel the smells of things, capturing the soul. Those who have the courage meat comes into contact with the strength meat in the world. Because there is truth, there is sweetness, there is sensitivity, there is still love.
(I try tried to translate these beautiful thoughs of an Italian poet.. I think I made do many mistakes, so thanks who for helping me.)
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It is a thought of a poet, not her work. for me it was important that the translation is correct.
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I like the poem, it has a pretty deep meaning. I don't dare try to correct it for fear of loosing or changing the intended meaning. I would leave it as is.
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I think your translation is reasonable. Since it was written by a poet and may actually be poetry, you might not want to correct it in the manner that you would correct a regular narrative or a conversation.
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