I've Got a Cold
I've tasted what it's like with a 40°C fever. The day before yesterday I was alone at home. At first I just felt uncomfortable and a little tired so I go to bed very early, probably 7:00pm. Then I started to feel dizzy and my body is burning and I kept waking up in the nightmare. I supposed I must go to the hospital. When I arrived I found I take another jacket and I forgot my money. So I had to walk another mile in the rainy midnight. It's terrible.
After my first experience of intravenous drip my fever is gone, but my throat still hurts and I don’t stop coughing.
Now it's the peak season for influenza. Please take care, unlike me.
Lastly, Happy New Chinese Year! 过年好!
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I Caught a Cold
Now I know what it's like to have a 40°C fever. The day before yesterday I was home alone. At first I just felt uncomfortable and a little tired so I went to bed very early, probably 7:00pm. Then I started to feel dizzy and my body felt like it was burning up and I kept waking up from nightmares. I thoughtAfter my first IV was done,
It's now the peak season for influenza. Please take care of yourself better than I did.
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Not just busy, but also a bad day.
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Is that your door? What is "Gelivable?"
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呵呵 You have a busy day. You need take care of yourself .
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