I'm assuming this is a speech. So the language and style will not be the same way as if in a written essay. Speaking and writing are two different things.

Hello, Ladies and gentlemen, I am very thankful that I am here to share very glad to stand here and share about my view on College Entrance Examination in China. 

I want to tell you But first, a story. There was A man who is a middle aged man who. Although he is always failing, he takes part in this test entrance exam every year and each year he failed miserably. When he was interviewed by a reporter, he said declared, 

“I won’t will never give up until I am successful. Lots of people Many are impressed by him, and so am do I. College Entrance Examination This ritual of an examination has affected countless Chinese students a lot. They all of them have a the same dream, was offered by that is to get into a good college armed with the results of this exam.  that can give them Why? An education from a prestigious college assures a good bright future. Because of this, Thus for better or for worse, thousands upon  and thousands teens study hard for their dream strive for obtaining the best results to this exam. This is College Entrance Examination’s spirit. It is the most important factor to promote teens working hand.  At least this is the official stance - to promote the industriousness of youth.

On the other hand. I also want to tell you other story the dark side, a student who has great grades, because of late, he cannot go into test room. At that moment, he just thought world stop committed suicide by jumping. Finally, he jumped out of the window and die. The reason? He was punished for his tardiness - for whatever reason, by not admitting him into the examination hall.  By this action, he thought his world had gone asunder.  I hope whoever had prevented him from taking his examination will be able to sleep well at night!  There is a another tragedy, ... so do all of Chinese. A serious hurt mother would say to her son, "Don't worry about me, just go and take your exams!"  This is not a good argument - 天下父母心, 世世代代如此, 不與西方無情無意, 不孝不忠於稷社. We are constrained by College Entrance Examination. As far as I conserved it is aspect that need improve. needs to be modified as it had turned into a cold-blooded mechanical monster, ruining countless of lives in ways not anticipated by its ideals.

The student who want to get offer of good college, they just know do their homework and improve their grade by other way. Students become mechanical bookworms just to follow the rituals set by the system.  It makes turns them become into unimaginative automatons, grinding unceasingly at the cogs of this machinery in order to get good grades. That is also a loophole that cost by College Entrance Examination. Most of teachers and parents pay more attention to test scores. Everything else is sacrificed.  Don't they know "All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy".  Well, you may argue that this is a Western thought. Well, in Chinese we have the Confucian Doctrine of the Mean.  Now argue this!

They do not care about our interest, hobby and our feeling. .... Just like me. This is not good argument at all because it is all about you. Too personalize and therefore not effective in persuading others to your view. You have to divorce yourself from it. This is what I would say,

We can only be young once. Yes, we need to learn and we need to play. Through play we learn how to become adept at interaction with others; to how to handle ourselves gracefully at social gatherings; how we guage and interpretate the actions of others. School books and taking examinations can never teach and show us how. Well, Jack Ma, son of traditional musician storytellers, founder of Alibaba failed his examinations thrice. I don't need to elaborate.

This monster needs to be tamed for the good of us all.

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College Entrance Examinations in China

Hello, ladies and gentlemen. I am very glad to stand here and share about my view on College Entrance Examination.

I want to tell you a story. A man who is middle aged. Although he is always failing, he takes part in this test every year. When he was interviewed by a reporter, he said “I won’t give up until I succeed. Lots of people are impressed by him, so am I. College Entrance Examination affects Chinese students a lot. All of them have the same dream: to be accepted by a good college that can give them a good future. Because of this, thousands and thousands of teens study hard for their dream. This is the College Entrance Examination’s spirit. It is the most important factor to promote teens in working hard.

On the other hand. I also want to tell you another story. A student who has great grades cannot go inside the test room because of tardiness. At that moment, he just want the world to stop. Finally, he jumped out of the window and died. There is a another tragedy. It was a hot day. A student who was going to take part in the College Entrance Examination is on the way to the test with his mother when the mother got hurt seriously. She just told her son “Go to the test room. Do not mind me.” Why do so many people care about this test, not only them, but all of the Chinese. We are constrained by College Entrance Examinations. As far as I am concerned, it is an aspect that needs to be improved.

The student who wants to get an offer in a good college, they just know to do their homework and improve their grade. It makes them become unimaginative. That is also a loophole that is caused by College Entrance Examinations. Most of the teachers and parents pay more attention to the test scores. They do not care about our interests, hobbies and our feelings. There is something that happened to me as far as I can remember. Every time I want to play with my friends, my parents say “The only thing you can do is that you should do your homework." When Every weekend, whenever I want to ride my bicycle, they also said “The only thing you should concentrate is your school work." I really want to travel for a vacation. My parents said “You're just wasting your time. You should study as much as possible." Because of the college, I have to use all my life to devote myself to College Entrance Examinations. Therefore, sometimes I cannot do something I wanted to do and I believe most of the viewers have had the same experience, just like me.

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