geuna park's notebook entry: Feb 10, 2011
I ordered my shoes online shop few days ago.
So I delivered my shoes today which has 9cm heel.
That makes me tall.
I want to go wherever with my shoes.
But today is so cold.
So I looked my shoese in my room.
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geuna park's notebook entry: Feb 10, 2011
I orderedMy shoes were delivered today. They have a
That high heel makes me a lot taller.
I want to go eveywhere in my new shoes, but becaue today is so cold
I just look
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geuna park's notebook entry: Feb 10, 2011
I ordered my shoes through online shop few days ago.I want to go wherever with my shoes.
But today is so cold.
So I look
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I ordered my shoes from an online shop a few days ago
my shoes where delieved today which had a 9cm heel
That makes me tall
I want to go ever where with my shoes
But today is so cold
So I left my shoes in my room.
If you would like me to help you with your English I can. my name is Glyn I am a white English man
Best regards
glyn
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