My spring festival
my spring festival
this year i decided to visit my uncle in beijing,and it's the first time i didn't spend the spring festival time with my family,i want this year different.
Unluckily,i bought the ticket opposite,i was so careless,because i was planning to order the ticket from Shanghai to Tianjin,and i could spend 1 night visiting in tianjin.
so the mistake made me a little loss,and i had to booked the flight to beijing again.
After i arrived in beijing,i went to the Tiananmen,it is quite a huge building,but it didnot interested me to go inside,so i just walking around a little bit,and just left.
In the next few days,i stayed at home teaching my niece English,some easy words such as apple,peapple,etc,and my uncle felt happy what i have done for his son.
As everybody know,when the chinese spring festival was coming,dumplins is the essential to the festival,we do that too,and so i helped my aunt made lot of dumplins.
and to the end of my trip in Beijing,i came back to shanghai.thats how i spent time in spring festival.
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my spring festival
this year i decided to visit my uncle in beijing,and it's the first time i didn't spend the spring festival time with my family,i want this year different.
This year I decided to visit my uncle who live in Beijing,it's my first time didn't spend the spring festival time with my family,because I hope this year is different from others.
Unluckily,i bought the ticket opposite,i was so careless,because i was planning to order the ticket from Shanghai to Tianjin,and i could spend 1 night visiting in tianjin.
Unfortunately, I bought the ticket is opposite direction . How careless I was! Originally I was planning to from Shanghai to Tianjin,Then I will have a night time to stroll in Tianjin.
so the mistake made me a little loss,and i had to booked the flight to beijing again.
I was a little disappointed due to my mistake, moreover I had to reserve a plane ticket to Beijing.
After i arrived in beijing,i went to the Tiananmen,it is quite a huge building,but it didnot interested me to go inside,so i just walking around a little bit,and just left.
After I arrived in beijing,I went to the Tiananmen Square. It is a quite huge building,but I did not interested to go inside,I had only a little strolled around the square,and then I leave.
In the next few days,i stayed at home teaching my niece English,some easy words such as apple,peapple,etc,and my uncle felt happy what i have done for his son.
In the next few days,I teach my nephew English at home,some simple words. such as apple,people,etc. My uncle felt so happy that what I had done for his son.
As everybody know,when the chinese spring festival was coming,dumplins is the essential to the festival,we do that too,and so i helped my aunt made lot of dumplins.
As well known,in chinese spring festival,Dumplings are essential in the festival. So I helped my aunt made a plenty of dumplings.
and to the end of my trip in Beijing,i came back to shanghai.thats how i spent time in spring festival.
My trip in Beijing was over,and then I went back to shanghai. Above is about my New Year travel.
Ps:I am not sure whether the corrects are both right,I hope it is useful for you.
this year i decided to visit my uncle in beijing,and it's the first time i didn't spend the spring festival time with my family,i want this year different.
This year I decided to visit my uncle who live in Beijing,it's my first time didn't spend the spring festival time with my family,because I hope this year is different from others.
Unluckily,i bought the ticket opposite,i was so careless,because i was planning to order the ticket from Shanghai to Tianjin,and i could spend 1 night visiting in tianjin.
Unfortunately, I bought the ticket is opposite direction . How careless I was! Originally I was planning to from Shanghai to Tianjin,Then I will have a night time to stroll in Tianjin.
so the mistake made me a little loss,and i had to booked the flight to beijing again.
I was a little disappointed due to my mistake, moreover I had to reserve a plane ticket to Beijing.
After i arrived in beijing,i went to the Tiananmen,it is quite a huge building,but it didnot interested me to go inside,so i just walking around a little bit,and just left.
After I arrived in beijing,I went to the Tiananmen Square. It is a quite huge building,but I did not interested to go inside,I had only a little strolled around the square,and then I leave.
In the next few days,i stayed at home teaching my niece English,some easy words such as apple,peapple,etc,and my uncle felt happy what i have done for his son.
In the next few days,I teach my nephew English at home,some simple words. such as apple,people,etc. My uncle felt so happy that what I had done for his son.
As everybody know,when the chinese spring festival was coming,dumplins is the essential to the festival,we do that too,and so i helped my aunt made lot of dumplins.
As well known,in chinese spring festival,Dumplings are essential in the festival. So I helped my aunt made a plenty of dumplings.
and to the end of my trip in Beijing,i came back to shanghai.thats how i spent time in spring festival.
My trip in Beijing was over,and then I went back to shanghai. Above is about my New Year travel.
Ps:I am not sure whether the corrects are both right,I hope it is useful for you.
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Sound like you had a great time. Beijing is such a great place to visit when in China. I visited Tiananmen Square 2 years ago and loved it. Food was amazing in Beijing. There are so many historic places to visit. It was difinitely one of my favorited trips to China......
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