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correct my english. Valentine's day. There are many couples who exchange gifts each other on Valentine's day. However, in Korea, women give chocolate to men on Valentine's day and then men give candy to women on White day March 14th. I think candy companies make this day to increase their benefits. When I was a kid, there was no White day as I remember. I am definitely sure that if you are single and you correct my writing, you will get an awesome boy or girlfriend. If you are married, you already have a woderful spouse. Have a good day.

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발렌타인데는 오랜 역사를 가지고 있습니다. 미안합니다. 역사의 발렌타인, 한국어로 된 그것을 찾을 수 없었어요. <br> <a style="font: 11px/1.5 'Helvetica Neue',Arial,sans-serif; color: #3B6EAE; text-decoration: none; border-bottom: 1px solid #3B6EAE;" href="http://www.mahalo.com/valentines-day-history/">More about Valentine's Day History at Mahalo.com</a><br>
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Correct my English  please.  매문장의첫번째글자는항상대문자로씁니다. 언어를 대문자로 씁니다.

Valentine's Day  < 문장의첫번째단어의첫번째글자는항상대문자입니다.


There are Many couples who exchange gifts each other on Valentine's Day.

However, in Korea, women give chocolate to men on Valentine's Day and

then men give candy to women on White Day, which is March 14th.

I think candy companies created this day to increase sales.

When I was a kid, there was no White Day as far as  I can remember.

I'm definitely sure that if you are single and you correct my writing, you will

get an awesome boy or girlfriend. < (ㅋㅋ  왜 생각합니까?)

If you are married, you already have a wonderful spouse. (아마, 하지만 항상 그렇게 처럼 아닙니다.. )Have a good day.  당신도!

빨간색    = 대문자로써주세요.    Capitalization
파란색   = 정정 & 철자                 Correction & Spelling
녹색        = 더자연스러운방법    More natural / common & Optional
보라색    = 코멘트 / 제안              Comment - Suggestion
 밑줄       = 구두점과 띄어쓰기   Punctuation - Spacing
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Correct my English.

Valentine's Day.

There are Many couples who exchange gifts with each other on Valentine's day.

However, in Korea, women give chocolate to men on Valentine's Day and

then men give candy to women on White Day, March 14th.

I think candy companies created this day to increase their profits.

When I was a kid, there was no White Day as I remember.

I am definitely sure that if you are single and you correct my writing, you will

get an awesome boy or girlfriend.

If you are married, you already have a wonderful spouse.

Have a good day.

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