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Describing me Hello my name is JuanFran and I am going to describe me. I measure one meter with eighty centimetres. My hair is short and brown. My eyes are brown too. I am slim. I like play football. I practise football two or three times a week. My favourite team is the Real Madrid and my favourite player is Raul Gonzalez but at present is Sergio Ramos. They like me because they play with the hearth and fight every ball. Also, for me is a referent Cristiano Ronaldo because he like me how play and how he is like a person because he is modest and he being millionaire, always help at others persons for example kids with cancer.

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Hello my name is JuanFran and I am going to describe me.

- let me tell you about myself 

 

(native way of sayning)

Anyway, why not Malaga CF? :)

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Not too bad, Well done !
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Describing me

Hello my name is JuanFran and I am going to describe myself. I am one meter eighty centimetres tall . My hair is short and brown. My eyes are brown too. I am slim.
I like to play football. I practise football two or three times a week. My favourite team is Real Madrid and my favourite player is Raul Gonzalez but at this present moment it is Sergio Ramos. They are like me because they play with their heart and fight for every loose ball. Also, I use Cristiano Ronaldo as a reference because he plays similar style to me and I  like his personality, for example he is modest despite being a millionaire and always helps others such as kids with cancer.

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Describing me

Hello my name is JuanFran and I am going to describe me. I measure one meter with eighty centimetres. My hair is short and brown. My eyes are brown too. I am slim.
I like to play football. I practise football two or three times a week. My favourite team is the Real Madrid and my favourite player is Raul Gonzalez but at presently is Sergio Ramos. They are like me because they play with the hearth and fight every ball.

 

(hard to understand what you are saying here)

Also, for me is a referent Cristiano Ronaldo because he like me how play and how he is like a person because he is modest and he being millionaire, always help at others persons for example kids with cancer.

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