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HEART DOOR MAYBE I MADE A MISDAKE THISTIME THE WRONG TIME, THE WRONG PLACE, AND THE WRONG MAN. REALLY WANNA OPEN MY HEART BUT SOMETIMES THE DOOR WAS CLOSED BEFORE THE HEART IS OPEN. I KNOW THAT EVERYBODY WANNA PROTECT THEMSEVES BECAUSE FEAR BEING INJURED SO THERE ARE NO MORE EXCHANGE WITH EACHOTHER NO MORE WORDS, NO MORE HEART SOMEBODY LIKE LIVE IN THEIR OWN WORLD, CLOSE THE HEART DOOR, UNALLOWED ANYBODY IN. MAYBE THIS IS TURE LIFE, QUIETNESS, APARTNESS. IN A WORD, WRONG TIME, WRONG PLACE AND WRONG MAN. BUT ANYWAY, THANKS ALSO. BECAUSE I MADE ENJOYED MYSELF, I ENJOYED EVERYTHING, HEARTBROKEN OR HAPPY.

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The Heart's Door

Maybe I made a mistake this time: the wrong time, the wrong place, and the wrong man. I really want to open up my heart, but sometimes I find the door was closed before my heart is opens.

I know that everybody wants to protect themselves, from fear of being injured. So there is no more exchange with each other; no more words, no more heart.

Some people like living in their own world, their heart's door closed, allowing no-one in. Maybe this is the true life: quietness and separation.

In a nutshell: the wrong time, wrong place and wrong man.

In spite of that, I'm also thankful... because I did enjoyed myself. I enjoyed it all, heartbroken or not.

I rewrote this is prose (I'm not sure if you meant to write it in poetry).  I hope the corrections are clear enough. My main note is to avoid using "wanna": it's a clear sign of terrible English.

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Look forward, every day is a brand new day:) good luck
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HEART DOOR

MAYBE I MADE A MISDAKE THISTIME

THE WRONG TIME, THE WRONG PLACE, AND THE WRONG MAN.

REALLY WANNA OPEN MY HEART

BUT SOMETIMES THE DOOR WAS CLOSED BEFORE THE HEART IS OPEN.

I KNOW THAT EVERYBODY WANNA PROTECT THEMSEVES

BECAUSE FEAR is BEING INJURED

SO THERE ARE NO MORE EXCHANGE WITH EACHOTHER

NO MORE WORDS, NO MORE HEART

SOMEBODY LIKE to LIVE IN THEIR OWN WORLD, CLOSE THE HEART DOOR, UNALLOWED ANYBODY IN.

MAYBE THIS IS TURE LIFE, QUIETNESS, APARTNESS.

IN A WORD, WRONG TIME, WRONG PLACE AND WRONG MAN.

BUT ANYWAY, THANKS ALSO.

BECAUSE I MADE ENJOYED MYSELF, I ENJOYED EVERYTHING, HEARTBROKEN OR HAPPY.
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Ava, These are very passionate and insightful thoughts of a very beautiful woman. You are his loss, I am sure. Life is a long and winding road which leads us to where, we won't know. But hopefully you will have many good experiences along the way, learn from them and move on with an open mind and a mended heart. I hope so anyway ... All the best, Doug
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Thanks for your encourage.

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